A poem I wrote for Johnny.

[velvet]

Well yeah, i'm no poet ;l
But I just thought i'd write him something special and get some advice on how to improve it before I give it to him
Thanks

Sometimes at night when I look to the sky,
I start thinking of you and I ask myself why?
Why do I love you?
I think and smile,
The list could go on for miles and miles,
Why do I need you?
The way I do,
You know I’d give up the world for you,
Why do I trust you?
I know you won’t lie,
If you ever deceived me, I’d curl up and die,
Why do I care so much?
About everything you do,
No matter what life throws at us, I’ll always be here for you,
I love you more than anything
And that’ll never change,
Even if the way I show it may be a little strange,
I promise you from this day on
That I’ll always be true,
Because if you ever went away, I don’t know what I’d do,
I want to spend my life with you
I’ll give all I’ve got to give,
Love, care, affection, and a house where we shall live,
I can tell you here and now
I’ll love you till I die,
Because I can’t stop loving you, not even if I try,
One-day things’ll all be fine
We’ll always be together,
And on top of a big white cake
Will say Jade And John Forever_x3

[Wayne]

That is an awesome poem. I really like it, well done. +rep.

However, you took the first few lines from this: http://www.acsu.buffalo.edu/~me5/ind...slide0001.html

[velvet]

That is an awesome poem. I really like it, well done. +rep.

However, you took the first few lines from this: http://www.acsu.buffalo.edu/~me5/ind...slide0001.html

Oh yeah sorry, I forgot to mension that,
Thanks

[Wayne]

Oh yeah sorry, I forgot to mension that,
Thanks

No problem. The rest of it isn't ripped, and it is still a great poem.

[velvet]

No problem. The rest of it isn't ripped, and it is still a great poem.

Yeah, it started as an assignment at school, hence the first few lines.

[Juicette]

I like the poem.
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