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  1. 26-05-2006, 03:07 AM #1
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    The Beach
    The water shimered as the sun gleamed upon it
    I stuck a toe in to be sure
    I slowly walked into the water
    The salty watered ever so more
    Running out for a drink every few seconds
    Staring at fish
    Watching people throw frisbees
    Glancing at the people who are tanning
    I leaned into the water taking my last breathe
    I leaned back far enough
    Enough to let me breathe
    The end
    (Was this a mermaid or not....dun dun dunnn)
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  2. 26-05-2006, 03:08 AM #2
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    I didn't like it, sorry.
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  3. 26-05-2006, 03:09 AM #3
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    I dont know much about it.
    My friend wrote it for her essay and i called her and told her about the website. She said she doesnt want to but you can post my poem.
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  4. 26-05-2006, 03:12 AM #4
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    Well that doesn't change my opinion on it..
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  5. 26-05-2006, 03:15 AM #5
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    I know. Im just saying...
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  6. 30-05-2006, 12:17 AM #6
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    Not too bad, well done.


    sexy girls come up to me,
    and they always come if you know what i mean.

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