Why... (WARNING EMO CONTENT)

[Emicat.]

When I try to explain,
All my words mubble and slip to the drain,
"Like a snowflake in a firey grip",
Trying to hide from the pain.

I try so hard to understand,
Why everything good slips from my hands,
I guess my life is damned to crash land.
I guess I'll never understand.

Sick of the torture of my painful life,
I'm scared that my friends will leave from strife,
I'm sick of all the anoyying and stupid *****,
Staying away from the knife.

The good times come and the good times pass,
But bad times scar and kill happy past,
Its what I live with, but hear what I say,
I'm sorta happy, yet everyone has to pay.

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[sarey]

Niceeee!! Pretty talented.

[Nick-]

omg! emo content!
it burns

im not much of a poet but i do have a few emos on my contact list and thats actually pretty good in comparison

[Craig]

It's not of a good standard. Some of the words used are a bit over-used in poems these days and adding a swear word is just stupid. Swear words and poetry just don't go well together atall. Try harder next time to think of better words/lines.

[sarey]

I have loads of poems, since i have depression, their pretty much about suicide, and .. uhm.. something else.
But yeah, not sharing them, hehe.
But this is good.

[louder]

it's pretty good.

[Emicat.]

It's not of a good standard. Some of the words used are a bit over-used in poems these days and adding a swear word is just stupid. Swear words and poetry just don't go well together atall. Try harder next time to think of better words/lines.

Swearing is an expression of anger which is why I used it. I have better poems, but I cba to type them up...

This one was already on my PC.

And everyone else, thanks alot.

[sarey]

Okay.. hows this poem then?
No one cares, i want to die, **** life, its all a lie.
you say swear words dont go with poems? ive got 7 poems which have swear words in. :/ Btw that poem is made up, and i filtered it with stars. ty. x

[Craig]

Okay.. hows this poem then?
No one cares, i want to die, **** life, its all a lie.
you say swear words dont go with poems? ive got 7 poems which have swear words in. :/ Btw that poem is made up, and i filtered it with stars. ty. x

Well your poems must be crap,cos by the looks of what you wrote your a little attention seeking wannabe emo.

[sarey]

Helloooo i wrote that when i was going thru major depression :/
Besides, not all SELFHARMERS are damn emos.
Get that in your little thick head alright lovey? Alright.
Furthermore, you should RESEARCH selfharm, you know crap about it mate, and depression too.
And i was merely proving a point that poems can have swear words in it.
Obviously you dont read.