Britain.

[velvet]

I just noticed I made a spelling mistake in the title rofl, so ignore that. I ment Britain. Anyway... :]

Wayne. (Super Moderator) Thread name renamed to Britain

Well yeah, I wrote this in school as we had to write what Britain ment to us. So this is my veiw. :]



Early morning business men with breifcases in hand,
Welcome to Britain, a far from beautiful land,
At 10 Downing Street, where the trouble starts,
Devistating familys, shattering hearts,
Ruled by Tony Blair, such an ignorant man,
Taking people lives, just because he can,
To Iraq, he sends some honorable men,
Who will probably never be seen again.
Britain, a highly polluted place,
With crime levels soaring, what a discrace,
Teenagers pregnant around the nation,
We've aborted a third of our generation,
Truency figures on the rise,
With todays adolecence it's no suprise,
At an early age, smoking and drinking,
Makes you wonder what the parents are thinking.
So when the next election comes,
Go to London, scream and shout,
If we all unite together we can get Blair out.

[Jesus-Egg]

I completely agree with your view.

It's a good poem, and the last line made me laugh. +rep

[Wayne]

Very good poem. I like it a lot.

[velvet]

Thanks for correcting it :]

[iluvben]

tis good

*disgrace

[jordybumz!]

pretty good rhymes you got there m8.

[velvet]

tis good

*disgrace

I did it without spell check and my spelling sucks anyway.
But thanks. ^^

[FlyingJesus]

Tony Blair FTW. However I do want Lib Dems to win the next election so they'll be in power when I leave college, because they want to make university tuition fees free off the government Then vote Conservative after that because I plan on being a mean old man as soon as I hit 20.

Oh, and on topic, a well written poem ^_^

[Victimized]

It's really good!

I especially like the last rhyming couplet, sums up what i feel.

[NekkLe]

Sounds great!

I like the part with sending the honourable men to Iraq, alot of thought put into this then? it works well