September Day

[Misawa]

The tranquil blue sky,
Ruptured with plumes of grey
The peaceful morning gaze,
Reflecting on the pain

The two colossal towers,
Submerged to dust
The pleasant sunshine,
Distraught by tragic flame

The cool city breeze,
Ripped apart by smoke
The tantalising skyline,
Littered with disaster

The world watches,
Transfixed by horror
The world mourns,
Engaged by death

The people's faces,
Burning with dismay
The people's eyes,
Indescribable

The terror remains,
Silent echoes in the wind
The hatred born,
Indescribable

The memory reigns,
As history it will lay
The mind shall never let grasp,
Of that September Day

A.S. Kelly

© Copyright 2006

[Sentrax]

Suuuummer has cooome and paaast
.....
Waaaake me uuup... when september eeeends!

This poem just made me think of that dreadful song..
But still, very good. Captures the effect I think you were going for.
Very well done!

[Hopeless]

very nice

sounds like it came from the heart. +rep

[dirrty]

Suuuummer has cooome and paaast
.....
Waaaake me uuup... when september eeeends!

This poem just made me think of that dreadful song..
But still, very good. Captures the effect I think you were going for.
Very well done!

dreadful song pfft.
that songs guurrd.


good poem btw.

[Rusty_x]

That was realy good +Rep

Rusty

[Misawa]

Thanks a lot for all the feedback and rep.!