my 2nd alt - a double bed

[hit-by-a-car]

i combined a bed with a bed the rest was mine i thought id keep the pattern and id make it a bending type of thing to look like a z-shelf plz rate (2nd alt) (personaly im in love with it)



micky.blue.eyes (forum mod): thread locked because you made 2 threads for the same alt. Please don't make 2 threads for the same thing. Other thread is here: http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=257959

[Caution]

1. Better than the last one
2. I've never seen anyone with a double bunk bed
3. Quite easy, but good for your 2nd

[hit-by-a-car]

THANKS A TON, for a remark like that id rep you, but it would be pointless

[Black_Parade]

Lots better then your last one but it is VERY Simple You shoud try some recolours.

[Acidulantes]

Good to see youve got some original ideas with the z-thing on the back... well done, and yea lots better than your last one keep it up hit!

[hit-by-a-car]

thanks so much, ill try to be good with all my alts in futre =)

[Untouchable]

Good for your 2nd alt and it's much better than your first.

Just a few comments.

Myabe forget about that thing at the head side of the bottom bunk.
Also add some of the stands the the head side.
If you want you can add a ladder so you can get to the top.
Add outline to the support bars and make sure the outline touches the actual bar.

These are just minor point but I hope that they will help you.

In time you will get better and be able to include all this points easily.

In the meantime just keep trying

[hit-by-a-car]

thanks.

[Papershop]

I dont understand what that back bit is?
And the poles have just been simply cut and pasted

[LiveToDie]

Nice...

I think you should work on the pole on the pole on the right.. Looks wrong when it joins to the bottom bed.


Other then that, good for you first =]