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    I noticed the error here however, 'The screams of your pain, you're plight'. It should of course be, 'your plight'.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Misawa View Post
    Good effort.

    I noticed the error here however, 'The screams of your pain, you're plight'. It should of course be, 'your plight'.
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