Ok Next Alt... TypoPC

[mattray114]

Lol anothet 2nd attepmt at an alt

/10 and C&C please

[Browney]

Alot of pixel errors. Work them out and it will look far better. I'm not sure if it's just the format you saved it in. Other than that, ok. A bit of dodgy shading with the orange on the PC but it's looking good so far.

[DozenFuries]

Alot of pixel errors. Work them out and it will look far better. I'm not sure if it's just the format you saved it in. Other than that, ok. A bit of dodgy shading with the orange on the PC but it's looking good so far.

Im with Cola. Lots of pixel errors, especially in the keypad itself.
And the shading could be lighter, just to improve quality and looks.

I'll give it a 7/10 for the idea.

\Doz<

[Black_Apalachi]

Aswell as all the errors, the Typo has just been pasted over a computer that you didn't even make (because I have seen it before). You need to make the join less obvious.

[Mr.Big]

Well, it has lots of pixel errors, and the left back corner looks really messed. 4/10

[CrazyCali]

I like where you going with the Ideal. But there are some pixel errors but keep trying 7/10

[Andy]

ditto to all, good idea, many pixel errors. what format did you save it in? - i suggest PNG for further alts. 7/10 for idea - 3.5/10 for the attempt

[Dj_dude007]

I like the idea however some of the shading looks dodgy and there is many pixel errors. Keep trying. 5/10.