MASSIVE STAGE (WIP)

[DJ-Precocious]

Well i aint posted in a while but here is my latest work its a work in progress the reason im posting is for ideas on what to do with it next and some constructive Criticism.

Its a bad quality image cos imageshack isnt working for me atm.

[Tiuhdur]

thats really good. a little dark though lite it up with diff colour lights

[DJ-Precocious]

Here is a better image.

[christophe]

ok i have a couple c+c's for you.
1. on the amplifiers try cross hatching sortof in an "x" shape to give more effect
2. on the lights try to give the appearance of some actual light coming off them by maybe adding red streaks along the air infront.
3. most stages have like tile or something on it or carpet or hardwoof so try to give a texture on the stage.
4. maybe try putting the actual band symbol on the poster instead of a habbo one maybe make it into sortof the shape of a habbo one?


hope this all helps you out also i was curious would you care if i were to do all of the cunstructive critism's that have been given so far and post what it would look like up on this post of yours?

[DJ-Precocious]

ok i have a couple c+c's for you.
1. on the amplifiers try cross hatching sortof in an "x" shape to give more effect
2. on the lights try to give the appearance of some actual light coming off them by maybe adding red streaks along the air infront.
3. most stages have like tile or something on it or carpet or hardwoof so try to give a texture on the stage.
4. maybe try putting the actual band symbol on the poster instead of a habbo one maybe make it into sortof the shape of a habbo one?


hope this all helps you out also i was curious would you care if i were to do all of the cunstructive critism's that have been given so far and post what it would look like up on this post of yours?

Sure you can, hope it looks good.

[DJ-Precocious]

Here is an updated version without me adding anything from the C+C cos i want to finish all of it first.

[PigsNose]

It is so dark I can't make out anything.
Why don't you turn some lights on?

Very good though.