Matrix kinda guy

Brainpower · 29-12-2006, 05:43 PM

I first made a hair alt,
than i thought it would look kinda cool if i gave him a suit.
So here it is:

It maybe look blank, but when you zoom in there is plenty of shading

I origanely made the orange hair one, but my brother convinced me to make
a black haired one to. I like the orange one more tho...

please rate */10

Ekalb · 29-12-2006, 10:42 PM

With that shading, you haven't really defined your light source.
just looking at the black haired one, you kind of show the light coming from his left but then there is some lightening on his back shoulder, his head would probably black that out..

There isn't much detail on it, perhaps add some pockets to the jacket and a collar to it.
And I'm surprised you didn't dither the shoes too. There isn't much to fault.
And I'm not really sure about using the dithering on the skin but I guess if you didn't it may look odd.
+rep because I think it looks good and there wasn't much wrong.