Not very good, here goes, Stone Collection

[FrozenWhisper]

Tbh, I don't like it. I'm going to add cracks and moss when I work out how. Will add Tables, chairs and a lamp later on. Also I'll put it in a catolouge or a room. Personally I hate the hatch but I tried. C&C and ratings please
Opps sorry, forgot to post link O.o

[Mado]

i Can't see it ???

[Axel]

You have to include the picture in the post first...

[FrozenWhisper]

Sorry added link. I'm going out soon but I'll try and improve tomorrow.

[Black_Apalachi]

Looks more like steel... but good effort.

I don't quite understand how the hatch works and why there is a "H" on the rug. :s

[Browney]

Ok well,

Stone Rug:
- Why?
- Why is there a H?
- Too many black in lines.

Stone Corner:
- To basic.
- Too many black in lines.
- Does'nt fit the stone bar.
- Unintresting design. Try give it a shine or as you said, moss.

Stone Bar:
- Too Thin.
- Too small.
- Too many black in lines.

Stone Hatch:
- Does'nt seem to suit the bar.
- Maybe to small.
- Black in lines.

As you've said yourself that you are'nt happy with these, I'll give it straight. You could have poured alittle more attention into these. Good ideas, just seems you can't get them out the way you want to.

6/10

[Porosity]

I also think that these are a little dull, of course this is better pixel work than that of my skills, but it seems like you need to add some more effort.

Nice though, 7/10

[Acidulantes]

Im not trying to be EXTREMELY rude, but this looks like the kind of thing simon305 would of done... good idea, but done badly. 6/10

The stone hatch closed, the bit in the middle seems thinner than the grey patch on the floor when its open... Im guessing you tried to make it look like it sneaks into the floor but the thickness is wrong...

They all need some sort of texture added, and more variation between the light and dark sides....

[FrozenWhisper]

Looking back at them they suck. The idea of the hatch is the middle bit goes down to let the habbo in. I'm going to completely redo it when I get home from my grans. Btw, does anyone know how I could do moss and cracks? I tried and it sucked.

[Browney]

Looking back at them they suck. The idea of the hatch is the middle bit goes down to let the habbo in. I'm going to completely redo it when I get home from my grans. Btw, does anyone know how I could do moss and cracks? I tried and it sucked.

To see a good rock effect look at this alt. Ignore the cannon just look at the shading and the moss for inspiration.

http://www.habboforum.com/alterations/27040-a.html


Also, another good rock effect from the same site is;

http://www.habboforum.com/alterations/24682-habboween-competition-alt-halloweens-eye.html

That is a brilliant example of a style of shading called "dithering." Copy that into paint and zoom in to look more closely at the shading.