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    I Know It Was A While Ago... But I Was Flicking Through My Pictures And Found This...


    Sorry I Could Only Find It Saved As A Gif...

    Yes All The Stuff Cept Text And Habbo Faces Was Made...

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    It's not very good sorry,
    -the guitars aren't 3d
    -The amps, microphones and guitars arn't isometric (2:1)
    -As you said saved as .gif (makes quality rubbish)
    -The amps, microphones and guitars need shading
    -Where the microphone is attached to the stand it's at a funny angle
    -The guitar is a bit lumpy
    -Pixel errors in the corners of the amps.
    -The buttons on the amp looks a bit weird
    -The crowd are bodyless
    -The base of the microphone stand is just a sraight line

    Improve on those things first. The only thing i like really is the text and the band members, sorry, i know it's from a while ago but it needs alot of work done to it.
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    Im curious, why would you post this?


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    Quote Originally Posted by MrChaz View Post
    Im curious, why would you post this?
    To find out where he went wrong on a previous alteration, thats why i gave him lots of c+c, there is no point flaming it.
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    Lol Kk
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