POEM READ HERE IF YOU AINT YOUR A TOTAL N00B PLEASE RATE THIS IS EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bloodkanekiller]

*Who am i*


Jack was 8
and he was in school waiting for his rate
but his teacher sadly said
im sorry jack but you never read
jack was always a sad little boy
and like films like troy
and his favirote thing was a toy
but his mum passed away
and the month was may
but something sad happened we never forget
that jack killed his father and he will never regret
the boy had a.d.h.d
but then the boy had a sighn
and then wighned saying father father im sorry
but then years went on he was about twentey
he never had a house he was really called a rentey
he rented houses all the time
ran out of money so he began to rhyme
he became famous and was paid a load
imagine how it changed his life and now he was a king
holding a big gold ring.

[la-ur-en]

I guess it's okay, but your title is a bit sad 5/10!

[GommeInc]

He has also admitted he is a n00b for not knowing what a n00b is. n00b means Newbie, not an offence. How can we be a newbie for not going on a thread? We cant go backwards back to a n00b.

[Michael.]

He has also admitted he is a n00b for not knowing what a n00b is. n00b means Newbie, not an offence. How can we be a newbie for not going on a thread? We cant go backwards back to a n00b.

Lol - Have a rep for confusing me Lmao!

[la-ur-en]

Lol - Have a rep for confusing me Lmao!

How did that confuse you... Anyway have a rep for being a bit dim and getting confused since i'm so generous!

[xJoeYx]

I hope they ban you.

[Card.Master]

THE POEM SOUNDS FUNNY LOL THIS GUY KILLS HIS DAD

[Mit]

THE POEM SOUNDS FUNNY LOL THIS GUY KILLS HIS DAD

thats not funny :@ .

[OxfordScholar]

That isn't a very funny poem :s

[Dirgeofcerberus]

The poem is very sad, and its very rubbish
If you made it up, your rubbish at poems