Pregnant

[Hannybobz]

Ooh had an urge to write a story SO i'm gonna!!

I'm going out tonight with all my girlies Kayleigh has just been finished so we're having a girlie night out to make her feel better I'm all ready by the door to go, waiting for Alice to get here and then we're off. I've got 2 litres of cider and some vodka and coke, but we're hoping to get served in a bar. I looked out of the window slowly waiting, I noticed Alice walking up the road, so I got on my shoes and left the house. Alice looks stunning as per usual, her long blonde hair curled. She greets me with a big hug, and we start to walk down the road.
"I've just met some lads!" She said excitedly "They've promised if we meet them later.. they'll get us into that pub on South Park Lane."
Typical of Alice, she can't go anywhere without bumping into a few lads and arranging to meet them.
"I thought we were having girls night?" I moaned
"We are!! They'll just get us in, get our drinks and then they'll leave us alone, I made them promise."
"Well I suppose thats OK"
As we walked down Jessica's drive, we see all the girls running to the door, Alice explained what was happening, and then we all set off to go and meet the lads, I had a funny feeling about that night. And as I turned the corner, I realised why...
"Jake?"
My ex-boyfriend was stood, in the crowd of lads we were supposed to be meeting, we had been together for a year and a half, it was going so great, until he asked me to sleep with him. I'm the only one of my friends whose a virgin. They all laughed when i told them I didn't want to sleep with them. Jake and I had an argument over it and he ended up going to a club, and he slept with another girl. Jake laughed when he saw me, and acted quite happy to pretend I wasn't even there, as we were walking on I tagged behind, all the lads were chatting up all my friends. So much for girlies night. I couldn't face Jake. I hadn't spoken to him until Alice had told me she'd found him sleeping with another girl. She'd been at the club that night.
When we got to the bar, the lads did as they had promised and got us our drinks. But they didn't leave. The other girls were all quite happy, especially Kaylee, and I suppose that was all that counted. I got up to go to the toilet, and just as I touched the door, I felt arms around me. Jake.

Will post more tommorow.. sleepy

[E]

wow, this story is great, 9/10 i enjoyed reading it! 9 because you have to right more and i understand you are sleepy lol.

[Jazza]

Well it's OK I suppose, For a non-fiction it's set out fine but if the story is fiction you would need to introduce the characters before they are talking to each other. 6/10