eMage - Design/Layout - Attempt 2 - Please Rate + rep.

[Mr.OSH]

Bonjour,

I made an attempt to design an eMage website or at least an idea for it and the first layout didn't come out too well so I've created a second one after thinking more carefully about it. I'd like again some constructive criticism and various comments on the layout as I'm trying to improve. I go rid of the majority of blurry text, got rid of the neon colours, made the layout larger, replaced most of the things and re-thought it and took all the other comments from the last layout into consideration. Anyway here it is thanks in advance...

[Oni]

Better but the boxes arent aligned and I think there is too much red around the boxes also eMage isnt TMed?

[Mr.OSH]

Better but the boxes arent aligned and I think there is too much red around the boxes also eMage isnt TMed?

I deliberately didn't mean to make them aligned specifically do you think it would look better that way? Also the TM is just for the purpose of the layout, on the real thing it wouldn't be there I just put it in randomly. Thanks for the comments + rep if I can.

[:Jamie]

Looks better then the one before, i like it

[:Edzy]

Bonjour,

I made an attempt to design an eMage website or at least an idea for it and the first layout didn't come out too well so I've created a second one after thinking more carefully about it. I'd like again some constructive criticism and various comments on the layout as I'm trying to improve. I go rid of the majority of blurry text, got rid of the neon colours, made the layout larger, replaced most of the things and re-thought it and took all the other comments from the last layout into consideration. Anyway here it is thanks in advance...

it seems a bit higgledy piggledy, try allign the structure and keep borders same thicknesses

[Mr.OSH]

it seems a bit higgledy piggledy, try allign the structure and keep borders same thicknesses

Ok thanks, I'll take that into account.

[Tomm]

Try www.colorlovers.com because I don't really like those colors together.

[Mr.OSH]

Try www.colorlovers.com because I don't really like those colors together.

I try my best with the colours really, but I'm not all that great at picking them. One factor may be the fact I am colour blind but I'll to use better colours next time. Thanks for the advice.

[iJoe]

teading the text is hard, i think it might be couse i'm tired

looking rely good though, i love the thing top right lol

+rep if i can