Random Design - Rate Please.

[Mr.OSH]

I've designed another random layout and I'm interested to see what people comments are, I'd like constructive criticism please and I'd especially would like to know what you think could improve it.

Thanks,

Jay.

[Oni]

The pink spoils it in my opinion it looks ok if its used just abit but not the whole layout.

[Aflux]

The pink is too over-powering.

[Mr.OSH]

The pink spoils it in my opinion it looks ok if its used just abit but not the whole layout.

OK thanks Ozzie, I'll take into account he colour when I do layouts in the future, thanks. + rep.

The pink is too over-powering.

OK thanks Adam, I'll try not to use such "over-powering" colours in the future. + rep.

[Invent]

Needs shading and different colours.

[Oni]

You always use that pink and in my opinion it ruins them all. The layout itself has a good structure its just the colours

[Mr.OSH]

You always use that pink and in my opinion it ruins them all. The layout itself has a good structure its just the colours

Yes, I seem to like that colour quite alot, I'll try to avoid it as it looks like it might be letting my layouts down.

Needs shading and different colours.

Thanks for the comment Simon, I'll think about that . + rep.

[:Edzy]

I've designed another random layout and I'm interested to see what people comments are, I'd like constructive criticism please and I'd especially would like to know what you think could improve it.

Thanks,

Jay.

top black backgrounded bit is gawjus, the rest lets down the top

well done though

[Ini]

Nice layout ;]

Really like but the pink is a bit tooo bright

Well done though ;]

[:Jamie]

I love the top bit, the pink 'ruins' the middle part. Its nice tho +rep