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    Default I hate you (a poem)

    I use to think I knew you
    I use to think you cared
    I gave you my heart
    I told you my deepest darkest secrets
    You made me believe I was your world
    and I thought you were mine
    but now I look back and realize you were
    like cancer eating away my life and all I want
    to say is I hate you and .. Ive never hated anyone
    until you look how shallow ive become and its all because of you

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    I Love it. I absolutely Love It.
    Since no ones encouraged you.
    its good , ive been through this phase in life b4.
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    One Of My Ex's , Was gonna break up with me.
    She basically told everyone , and i was the last to know.
    i mean you dont want everybody to know , but no no no.
    Yeh , so i felt used.
    Maybe u could add a little bit of rhyme to it.
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    Heres one i made on the spot
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    I hate the way i love you
    the way u stroke your hair
    i hate the way i love you
    the way u used to care.

    Even though your'e not here,
    i think of you everyday,
    i wish you were by my side,
    in every single way

    But things come and go
    and i have to say goodbye
    for you have forsaken me
    A feeling i cant deny

    I hate the way i love you,
    the way u stroke your hair
    i love the way i hate you
    even when your not there.

    Sorreh its a lil sappy.
    its really quick
    Its about the quality of the post, not quanity! ©

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    Its Me Again. Just want to say thanks for sharing your poem to us.
    Its about the quality of the post, not quanity! ©

    "One Who Gossips to you, Gossips OF you."©[My quotes, Mine! *Smack*]


    E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G "Cuz your my everything ... "

    Keep Giving Rep Points To People Who Deserve It Its Not A Popularity Contest © ?-Doc-?

    "I Am .. Your Father"

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