Hotel Discovery - Ends 16th June

[MissAlice]

Have you got a sense of humour? Can you write a funny story? Your story must be about a new habbo who has just discovered Habbo Hotel. It’s their first day on habbo, they haven’t met or made any new friends as yet awww. During this their first day they are going to meet 3 very different habbo’s. A Habbo staff member, a Habbox staff member and finally a scammer, so be sure to include all three. Try to make it comical but please keep your story clean. The maximum number of words allowed for this competition is 500 and NO MORE. Any entry that is disrespectful will instantly be disqualified.

The Prize:-
Your article published in the Articles on Habbox home page plus one month free VIP for the forum and a HC Sofa kindly donated by lukeisok

To enter this competition you must be a registered member of our forum. Habbox is giving all its members (NOT STAFF) the opportunity to enter this competition; click on the post reply icon below.

Your entry should look like the example below:-

Habbo Name: MissAlice
Habbox Name:
Followed by your entry:- HOTEL DISCOVERY

And remember to enter this competition you must be a registered member of the Habbox forum.

Follow the link below to go to the competition entry page and click on the post reply icon, leave your habbo name and your entry.

This competition will run until 16th June unless otherwise stated. After that Habbox Writers and MissAlice will pick the best entry and the prize will be handed over in Habbo.

One entry per Habbox Member ONLY.
Please read the terms and conditions at the bottom (In Black)

Terms and conditions: To prevent foul play, we only allow one entry for each pc. If more entries are sent using the same pc all the entries will be discarded. You can send in your entry until the competition is closed at some time on June 16th 2005. Please be aware that some competitions may be extended, or even closed early due to the number of entries. The winner will be announced on the site and in this forum and will be contacted by MissAlice to collect the prize. Habbox has the right to close the competition at any time before the competition ending date and the winner will be judged from all the entries received up to that point. Habbox Writers and MissAlice will be judging the competition any harassment or attempted bribery will see you disqualified and could even get you into trouble on the Habbox Forum. ALL Habbox staff are excluded from participating in Competition, unless Competition states they may.(This includes habbox.com habboxforum.com habboxtv.com and habboxradio.com staff), and also includes trialists who become staff before this Competition closes. Any entries that break the forum rules in anyway will also be disqualified. Prizes must be claimed within two months of the winner/s being announced. Unclaimed prizes will be used again in a future Competition.

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Winner Announced - 21st June 2005
Winner - Syd
Prize handed over - 24th July 2005

[Jõnathan]

Habbo(x) name: Jon606

DISCOVERING HABBO HOTEL!

Jason had heard that Habbo was a good thing, so he decided to go on it himself. He made a habbo called x75-Jase-75x and made him look real smart.
'Man, this is gonna be good!' he said, as he made his UK habbo.
When he logged in, he saw the welcome lounge- the place for all new habbos.
'Hey, that'll be a good idea', he thought.
In the lounge, Jase sat down. Then a habbo called TheSid606 came up and sed 'hi'
Jase replied back 'hi. how are you?'
Then SEC (a hobba) arrived.
'You must be new. I'm SEC.' SEC said. 'I'm a hobba!'
'What's one of those?'
'A hobba is like a police officer,' he explained.
'cool!' Jase replied.
Then a message popped up on screen 'Visit Jon606 for the best quiz ever!'
'Hmmm.....' Jason thought. 'I'll go there!'
He searched Jon606 and went to Jon606`S ROOM! The message said: QUIZ TOURNAMENT NOW ON!
For a newbie, he did well. EXTREMELY well, in fact, winning a birdbath, throne, and a trophy with 'YOU RULE! WELL DONE x75-Jase-75x ON WINNING QUIZ TOURNAMENT 2005!'
'Cool!' Jason exclaimed.
Then he saw DJ-3000, and asked him a good question.
'wat does [HxHD] stand for in your mish?'
DJ replied, 'Habbox Help Desk!'
'Cool!' Jase replied.
'I g2g now Jase, c ya l8r' DJ replied.
'bi' Jase replied
Then a habbo called Mr.606! came up.
'GO ON www.cheesyfeet'r'us.com 4 500 CREDS!'
'ok' Jase sed.
He went 2 the site, but it had a message on that said 'YOU LOSE! HAHAHAHA!'
Weird site, Jason thought.
Then his habbo screen restarted up.
'Must've errored,' he said.
Then he entered his details, and played good clean games until he logged off at 19:46:24 to do his homework.
At 20:46:30 he went back on, but something looked different. His habbo was a girl!
'Huh?'
Then he went into a room, and checked his hand. NOTHING WAS THERE.
'OH NO! MY FURNITURE! GONE!' he screamed.
Then a console message from Mr.606! came.
It read: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I SCAMMD U, MORON! GO AND KISS YOUR DREAMS GOODBYE, N00B! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAA!
'I'm not going back on that again!' Jason angrily announced.
Then a few years later, he re-joined as BigBadJase75.

Shows how much encouragement it takes to come back on here, eh?

END OF STORY. HOPE THIS WINS!

[Grabbed]

Habbo name: Grabbed
Habbox name: reeski10

Hotel discovery

'habbo hotel is gonna be so cool' Jamie thought as he clicked 'check in!'
'I am so glad my mate told me about this!'
When Jamie created his habbo, Jamie3545, he had no idea what the day had in store for him...
He curiously looked at the navigation, wondering what room he could enter.
Eventually decided to click on 'The theatredrome' because the picture looked fascinating to him. He loaded up the room, and looked around.
'Dis room is soo kwl!' He typed. He thought if he sat down someone would sit down next to him and be his friend. All of a sudden a load of other habbos came in and filled up the stage. One of them actually sat next to him. he was called MOD-IT. When jamie clicked on him, next to his picture was a small badge saying 'habbo staff'. Jamie asked him;
'whats ur badge about?'
MOD-IT replied, 'It shows people that I am a member of habbo's staff. I help people out and get rid of scammers who may want to take your furni.'
'wow' said Jamie. 'this is mi first tyme on habbo, and i met a habbo staff. kwl!'
'Enjoy your stay Jamie, and stay safe!'
jamie decided to go into a guest room to see habbos up close and furni that everyone had told him about. he saw a help room called habbox help desk, and thought;
'the habbos in there will be able to help me with my questions about furni'
When he entered he saw a habbo in a white bobble hat called Seacat sitting behind a desk.
jamie walked up to him, sat down and asked 'hey wat do u do here? im new'
Seacat answered, 'welcome to habbo, and habbox help desk. habbox is a fansite dedicated to helping people out, and entertaning them too. I work here, and i am happy to answer your questions.'
Jamie said, 'wow seacat! i tink u told me enuf lol! im gonna make a room'
seacat asked, ' would you like some furni to get you started?'
Jamie nearly fell off his chair at this proposal!
'YES PLEASE THANK U SO MUCH IT WUD RLY HELP ME!'
'Not a problem jamie, you can have a tv, and a few chairs.'
He opened the trade box, and jamie got the furni.
'bi seacat. habbox rules im gonna come here all the time!'
'Bye jamie'
a few hours later, when jamie had his room sorted and was relaxing in front of the tv, a habbo came through his door.
'cool more ppl mite come' said jamie.
The habbo sat down next to him and said;
'add me 2 m.s.n and ill b ur friend'
Without asking questions, jamie took the habbo's email and started speaking to him over msn messenger.
The habbo offered to send a file called 'free furni.exe'
On his habbo browser, seacat entered the room and asked
'hey jamie, hows it going?'
'Great seacat! im getting a free furni cheat on m.s.n' said jamie, avioding the bobba filter unknowingly.
Seacat dropped his juice, and ran over to jamie, shouting;
'Noooo, dont accept it! Its a keylogger!'
Jamie clicked cancel on his msn window.
The habbo, whose name was mr.helper4 said;
'what are you talking about, u get free furni from it stupid!'
A vision of MOD-IT came to jamies mind. MOD-IT was saying,
...'get rid of scammers who may want to take your furni.'
Jamie looked at the habbo.
'UR A SCAMMER! U JUST WANT MY FURNI'
Immediately, he clicked 'kick' and mr.helper4 was booted out of the room.
As an extra precaution, jamie put a password on the room.
'Thanks so much seacat! i wud have lost my account if it wasnt for u.'
'dont worry jamie, your not the only one who has run into a scammer before.'
Jamie had had a very busy day, but this was three years ago. Now, he and seacat are very good friends, and jamie has a lot of furni, and knows much more about habbo.
Discovering habbo is a very exciting thing. but too much excitement and not thinking clearly, can ruin the adventure.

[Becky.]

Habbo Discovered!!!

Becky randomly typed in words on her computer when all of a sudden www.habbohotel.co.uk came up!!
She logged on as a new user called xo-bj-ox!
'Wow, this looks cool,' She Shouted.
She went down through the public and found a place called 'The Welcome Lounge'
She went in there.
She looked around and saw lots of new habbos.
She walked up to a habbo called jac.88.
'Hi,' She said.
'Hi,' The habbo replied, 'r u new?'
Suddenly a ! came up in the console in the bottom of the screen!
Becky clicked on the ! and accepted jac.88's friend request.
'Um..what,' xo-bj-ox said, 'Oh yeah i am.'
'Accept my friend request please,' jac.88 said.
'I have,' She replied.
'I'm quite rich on habbo,' jac.88 said, 'But i'm looking for easy, priceless ways to get more furni.'
Becky igonored that sentance, like any new habbo would!
'I g2g,' jac.88 said.
'Ok, xo-bj-ox replied,'Bye.'
xo-bj-ox left the room and went to look for more rooms.
bj found a room called habboxradio party!!!!
'That looks good!' Becky exclaimed.
bj went into the room.
It was crowded and in the middle of the room was a habbo called darter21.
'Why's everyone crowdin that habbo,' bj said.
'Because its the habboxradio dj!!' A bunch of habbos shouted!
'Ok ppl,'darter21 said,' Theres another lil competition now.The prize is a hc sofa, blue amber lamp and a silver nelly!!!
The habbos all cheered.
'The competition is the 30th friend request sent to me will win these prizes!'darter said, 'Ok u can start sendin f/r's now!
As the time passed all the habbos in the room were sendin constant f/r's to darter21.
Bj took her time and sent 2 f/r's to darter at different times.
About 3 mins l8er darter had a million f/r's comin thru.
'Ok, darter said, There's enough f/r's now so stop sendin them!!!'
A minute later darter said that xo-bj-ox is the winner!!!
A trade box came up with 1 hc sofa, blue amber lamp and a silver nelly/elephant!!!
'Wow, bj said, 'This is amazin.'
'Congrats to xo-bj-ox, said darter.
Bj left that room and created a room called Becky's space!!
She went inside and put the prizes in the room.
'De duh dun.'
A messege came up in the console!
Bj read it.
It was from jac.88.
It said: Meet me in your new room! I have to show you something.
Bj waited in her room and eventually jac came.
'Hi jac,' bj said, 'What u got 2 show me?'
'Wow, nice furni!' jac said.
'I can get you more!' jac said, 'All i need is your password to habbo and in 1 hour you will have 100 credits 2 spend!'
'Ok,' bj said!
Bj shouted out his password to jac and then jac ran off!!!
A message came up sayin an error occured.
She logged back on and had no furni.
'Be more careful' Said Callie

Edited By MissAlice - Competitions Manager
Which characters are the Habbox staff member and Habbo staff member?

[Kezzo]

Habbo Name: KegOak
Habbox Name: Look up Kezzo :p


Benjie decided to go onto this website that his friend recommended to him. This website was called Habbo Hotel. Soon Benjie made a Habbo called BenJJ. Soon enough Benjie found himself lost in Habbo.

"Oh dear" Benjie said, "Which room first?"

Eventually Benjie chose a room called 'Welcome Lounge'. He was so excited to meet some new friends. He went and sat down on one of the chairs and sat there say 'Hi I’m new' and pressing various buttons to see what they did. Eventually someone called Mr.Naw came and sat next to him and said.

"Hi, do you want to be my friend? Mr.Naw said

"Yes!" BenJJ exclaimed

"Don't forget to accept my friends request!" Said Mr.Naw as he smiled oddly.

"I won't." BenJJ said as he accepted the friends request.

BenJJ decided to go to a room that was on the popular list called 'Callie's Big Meeting'. Intrested to see who this 'Callie' was he went into the room. He was excited to get into the room. He saw this woman Habbo sat on top of this stand sort of thing called the Speaker. He went up to this woman habbo and said 'Hi I’m new, who are you?' BenJJ asked.

"I’m Callie, the Hotel Manager." She said smiling. He then saw a Habbo in the corner drinking some 'java' so he went up to her and went.

"What is java?"

"Java is coffee, it comes from that coffee machine over there.” She said "I’m BenJJ, who are you?" He asked

"I’m .x.!Anita!.x., Nice to meet you." She replied.

"I’m new! What's Habbo like?" He asked sitting next to her.

"Really cool, like living in a hotel. You can even make your own room and you can make it like a cupboard if you like!" Glitz replied

Benie gasped "A cupboard!?" He gasped again

"A cupboard." .x.!Anita!.x. said smiling

"I’m doing a competition on Habbox radio, www.habboxradio.com open a new page in your Internet explorer and put it in the address bar." Anita said.

And that's what Ben did.

"Who is the hotel manager? Send it in a request and under the scroll down menu select competition" A voice presumably Anita's announced

Ben knew this he typed it in the request area under competition and he put 'Callie'.

"We have a winner! And the winner is.... BenJJ! The voice announced. "Your prize is a HC Sofa an Oil Lamp and a Hammock

When Benjie went back to the Hotel page he saw that Anita opened a trade box and she had put all the furni in it, he quickly accepted. He then hobbled off and made a room called 'The Cupboard' and he put all his furni down. He then saw his friend, Mr.Naw.

"Give me your password and I can triple this furni!" Mr.Naw said

"Cool!" BenJJ said and typed in his password

Then suddenly he got errored and he had to restart habbo, he typed in his name and his password and found that his Habbo was a female, to make it worse he thought it was very very ugly he went into his room and found a bright pink sticky on the wall but no furni. The sticky said; "Ha ha ha I scammed you bad loser! From Mr.Naw"

Then Benjie said he'll never go on Habbo again

Edited By MissAlice - Competitions Manager
Which character is the Habbox staff member?
Sorry- Done now Kezzo

[.Amberz.]

** Habbo Hotel Discovery **
Habbox Name: AngelAmberz
Habbo Name: .Amberz.

Amber had heard a few boys from her class talking about this fantastic site named Habbo Hotel, after ages of wondering what it was. Amber deicded to ask one of the boys the address to get on this Habbo Hotel. He told her that it was www.habbohotel.co.uk and that night she went on it. She made a habbo, and at first she thought it was cool to had brown messy hair. The first place she visited was "Habbo Lido" she thought it was great, but she didn't know how to get into the Pool. There was a Habbo there, he was wearing gangsta black hats.
"Whats wrong?" The habbo said.
"Erm, I can't get into the pool..." I replied.
"Oh, right." The habbo said.
"How did you get in?" I asked puzzled.
By this time, the other Habbo was begining to think, and then he grinned at Amber. Amber was sure he was going to answer her question, and within seconds she'd be in the pool.
"You have to pay furni to get in the Pool." The habbo said.
"But, I have no furniture?" Amber said.
"Then no pool." The habbo said.
"But, thats..." Amber said moaning.
"No buts, look, If you want to get in the pool, theres another way. You have to give me your password." the Habbo said quietly.
"Ok then" Amber said.
She gave away her password and within minutes she had got disconnected. The mean old Habbo had got in as her. But he hadn't changed her password, so she was able to get back in.
Amber stood there all bored and glum in her bare and boring room, then suddenly someone was at the Door... Who was it? IT WAS THE SCAMMER!
"Mwhahahahahaha!" The scammer shouted from the doorway.
He left, because Amber kicked him. Moments later, someone else had entered the room.
"Go away, Go away, SCAMMER!" Amber shouted angrily.
"I'm not a scammer, I'm here to help you." Said the Habbo at the door.
Amber clicked the Habbo, and it had a badge saying "Habbo Staff" she was totally surprised.
"Habbo staff?" Amber asked.
"Yes, my name is Callie, I've been watching your conversation with this Scammer, we must hit him on the head with a Hammer!" Callie said laughing.
"Yes, why not?!" Amber replied.
"So, you've been scammed? Good thing your password hasn't been changed, and that you had to furniture. How long you been on Habbo Hotel then?" Callie asked nicely.
"Only about 15 minutes." Amber replied sadly.
"Oh my! Well, come here, heres a Duck, keep it. And ignore people which call you a total Noob" Callie said winking.
"Whats a Noob?" I asked.
"Boy, Amber, you have a lot to learn... But in months to come, you won't be Noob. I'm sure you'll have changed from that to a Rich habbo."
"I wish!" Amber said laughing.
"Next time when someone tries to Scam you, click blue question mark, and press call for help, and there you go, we've busted that Scammer." Callie said smiling. "Cya later, Amber, got to go to work."
"Work?" I asked.
"Yes, I'm the Hotel Manager" Callie said, then went out the door.
"WOW!" I thought, I'd just met the fantastic Hotel Manager Callie! While walking through Public rooms, I came across the Habbo Gardens, I parked myself on a bench, and this girl which her mission "Army HQ Owner" sat next to me.
"Hiya, want me to double your furniture?" She asked.
"I only have a duck" Amber replied.
"Yeah, I can make 2 of them, I just need your furniture 1st" She said.
"No, thats a SCAM!" Amber shouted. "SCAMMER! SCAMMER!"
Then a notice appeared on Ambers computer screen from Callie the Hotel Manager saying "Wow, congratulations, you know a scam. Your no Noob, Amber. And You never was."
Amber was very proud. But anyhow she called for Help, and a Hobba came into the Gardens and banned her, she was very pleased with Amber for helping her bust another Scammer. Later on, Amber visited Habbox Forums, she was reading through the safety tips etc and one of the Forums Moderators was searching though the Forums. Amber added a article about the scam she just had, and how to avioid it. The Moderator sent her a Private Message saying "Wow, thanks to that, some Habbos won't fall for that scam, well done..."
And from that day forward, Amber was helping Habbos when they got into Scams, and she never wore the brown messy hair again!

Edited By MissAlice - Competitions Manager
Which character is the Habbox staff member?

[hellzfrost]

Habbo Name: hellzfrost
Habbox Name: hellzfrost
My Entry:

Hotel Discovery

It was a Thursday when hellzfrost dicovered Habbo Hotel. At a party somebody had told him about it. It was exciting to be playing a cool new game. hellzfrost made his first room and bought his first ten credits. There was only one thing he didn't have - friends. So hellzfrost decided to go to the Welcome Lounge. Suddenly someone was typing "Add Me 2 ur freinds list for free credz!" really fast. hellzfrost added him to his Friends List and got a message, it read.. "tell me your pass.word and i'll give you loads of free credszz!" Things were going really well for hellz, he ws going to get more free credits and his first friend! hellzfrost so happy he shouted out "wow somebody will give me free credits if i tell them my pass.word!" However a Hobba called MADAME!!! came rushing in. "Don't tell anybody your pass - it's a scam - they will steal your account!" But hellzfrost had already gave the scammer his pass... Soon he was disconnected and when he came back online all of his precious furni was gone. He was annoyed and upset. Rushing into [HxHD] Helpdesk he shouted "help ive been scammed " Luckily for him somebody called lukeisok was there. lukeisok asked hellzfrost what had happened and hellzfrost told him everything. lukeisok was very nice to hellzfrost and told him not to worry. "why?" hellz asked. lukeisok then traded him putting a HC Sofa into and accepting. He soon explained it's value to hellzfrost and he was over the moon. hellzfrost thanked him over and over again and then finally left. lukeisok was the kindest person he had ever met and he was a true friend, not like that nasty scammer. hellzfrost knew that lukeisok was a kind, generous person with a heart not of Bronze, not of Silver, but Gold...

[djotto1991]

Habbo name: djotto1991
Habbox name: djotto1991
My entry :

A new habbo joined the hotel his names was banana
His sister followed her name sultana
On their first day they bought lots and lots of furni
All part of their mystical habbo journey

The next day a dealer made them a deal
He said if you give me your password ill give you a wheel
Wow thats rare he said
Before consindering the deal and going to bed

The next day the Dealer saidif you give me your password youll have 500 credits
So he said to everyone i can tust him its the way he said it
But it was all a scam
A shock for little banana when he found out the scammer was sultana

So he made a new habbo all dressed in pink
And to make his bathroom he bought a kitchen sink
Which made everyone think
Who is this guy why doesnt he blink

The next day he said how happy am i
im a moving pixel just like the sky
A new community a new life
A new habbo family with a new habbo wife

Then his second week came when dionysus announced
a new competion to increase your bank balnce
banana entered the competion with glee
and is now the little rich boy you may all see

[Em1nemD12]

Habbo Name: Em1nemD12
Habbox Name: Em1nemD12
Entry:

Steven checked Into Habbo for the first time under the name Iluvcheese and stared at the massive array of rooms.
"Whoooooooa" He gasped and went to a room named Save The Bunneh's where he met a small yellow duck.
"Hey Man Whre U Live ?" He said staring down at what he thought was another user.
"Anser Me Dood, Or Your Stoopid* He Was Now Poking The Duck With A Large Stick.
"OMG YOU STOOPID PURSAN OMG" Steven Kicked The Duck Against The Wall, Unfortunately It Was A Power Duck, It bounced back and hit Steven in the eye.
"OWWWWW YOO CHEETER FIGHT LIKE A MAN" He was now grabbing his eye desperatly when he tripped over a stool and fell right next to a person called MOD-IT
"Hey Dud Wid Da Shiny Badge Why Wont Dat Stoopid Dood Talk ?" Steven Yelled Almost Screaming
"Because Its Not A Person ... Its A Rubber Duck and that so called shiny badge is on me because im Habbo Staff !" MOD-IT Said staring at Steven gormessly.
"Wow Habbo Staff ! And the duck ................ I thought it looked like a pig." Answered Steven looking over at the rubber duck behind his back.
"I suggest you go to the Habbox Help Desk I messaged my friend Seacat she's expecting you."
"Ok ... will I get free cookies there ?" Steven smirked and remarked, but when he looked up, MOD-IT was gone ...
Just as Steven was about to leave the room a guy called Scammeer came up to him and said.
"Yo Dude Gimme Yo Password And Ill Make You Habbo Staff." Scammeer silenty giggled.
"Must ... Get ... Shiny ... Staff ... Badge ... Pass ... Is ... Cheeser0xors" Steven replied stuttering with his jaw wide open.
Just as he was about to thank the scammer he disapeared in thin air.
"WTH WHY DUS EVERYBODY VANISH, THEY CUD SAY GUDBI"Steven exclamed angrily and he marched off to the Help Desk.
"Hello Iluvcheese I've been expecting you" Seacat called over to Steven who was admiring a photo of an army of ducks sorrounding an unexpecting Bunny Lord.
"Ello U Must Be Seacat" Steven exclamed joyfully.
"Sure Am, And Im Here To Tell You About Scammers And To Never Trust People Who Say They Can Make You A Hobba Or Staff."
"OH CRUDD" Yelled Steven as loud as he could when he got disconnected, bothered about that and the fact he got tricked into giving his account away, he had to change his password and fast ... but when he tried to log on ... his password was wrong !

Thank You For Reading This !

[-Soph-]

Habbo name: sophiemeakin
Habbox name: sophiemeakin
Hotel discovery

Habbo was going to be great! thought sophie as she pressed the "Create a habbo" button, she read the rules and pressed that she agreed, named her habbo, put in a password with loads of capital letters, numbers and somethings really tricky to guess, and she made a habbo and made it look awesome! Sophie decided to visit [HxHD] Habbox helpdesk first, she thought it was a really good room with lots of furni and friendly people in it, she went and took a seat at the helpdesk, someone called :.bex.: came up to her and asked her if she needed any help, Sophie said yes, she needed to grasp the basics of habbo, :.bex.: told her all the basics of habbo and a few more extra tips, like how to avoid getting scammed and what a scammer is. Suddenly a habbo walked in the room called n00b and started flooding:
Say your pass it comes out as stars!! LOOK **********
Sophie was just about to say her pass but then she remembered what :.bex.:'s advice was and she didnt say it... she just avoided losing her habbo to the hands of a greedy hacker, but no one yet had noticed mizki hiding in the corner, except the scammer who was enjoying a nice IP ban from habbohotel