You could have been someone.

[Bef]

This is the poem i was looking for. Hm, it aint very good but its just getting some stuff of my chest. It's going in for my gcse English though.

You could have been someone
But I took your life away
It was the hardest thing I’ve had to do
But I didn’t have much say.

You could have been someone
So where r u today?
I wish I could have held you tight.
Watched u laugh and grow and play.

You could have been someone.
But nothing i do will change the fact
U can never turn back time
And bring my angel back.

You could have been someone
But your smile remains unseen
One thing I no my Love
I’d of Loved you whoever you’d been.

You could have been someone
A someone who’d of been mine
But I’m a cold-hearted *****,
You’re the helpless victim of my crime.

You could have been someone
But you were never born to die
Do u watch down from above
Are u with me while I cry?

You could have been someone
But u have no life to live
But if only I could ask u
My baby please forgive!

[hedgeog325]

Very good

[Bef]

Thanks! :]

[Y!]

Stop being so talented

[Surname]

Nice poem Well done

[Bef]

Thanku everyone!! Its full of feeling this poem about a really hard point in my life! Has anyone got any C+C on it?

[Bef]

C+C pleeease, sorry 4 double post but i real need some help with this poem!!