My first jingle ;)

[Luke]

So yeh, i had a dry voiceover, so i downloaded various tools on this forum and mixxed my very own jingle


http://www.habboupload.com/upload/au...1198224440.mp3

Luke

[Swinkid]

Thats kwl

[luce]

OMG I WORK AT HABTOWN!

[Luke]

i'm the owner...

[Hayd93]

sounding pretty good u cut over the v/o's a bit you should make the v/o's louder.The mix its self was good you should try to make your own montages though.But ye the logic you got spot on fine tune it a bit and it would sound pretty good.deffinately not the worst i have ever heared by far i have seen ppl try to sell alot worse than that