What Do You Think..

[Jebbo]

hello i have made this thread to see what you people thing of my welcome page to my new website and how i can improve it.
please do not just say "its rubbish" please include a reson and how i can make it better

Please note:
i am not a good graphics designer.
i do not have photoshop i use MS Paint
the website is a shop and for competitions.

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[Toughened]

It's not very eye catching and has too much information on.
Keep information either as minimum or little as possible.
Have better colours and things.

[Robbie]

It looks terrible, sorry!

[L?KE]

I'll make you one if you like.

I'm bored and I got nout else to do. Not coding it though.

[Jebbo]

@Toughened Thankyou for your help.
@Robbie! Please say how i could improve
@L?KE yes please.

[MrCraig]

[] - Text too close together
[] - Its just a few boxes
[] - Black and white = Not a good combo.

[L?KE]

PM me lol, cos I forgot to recheck thread :}

[Everlong]

Paint has allot more potential than that, expand beyond the the text and shape tools.

[Hypertext]

[] - Text too close together
[] - Its just a few boxes
[] - Black and white = Not a good combo.

LOL! Somebody doesn't know too much :rolleyes:

[L?KE]

Lol I agree, black and white isn't a bad thing