Poem give mah a rep if u like

[Motorollo]

Blood racing thru his body and his veins

he knew it was wrong but he did it anyway


now it is over and he dosent know what to do


should he lie to everyone or just tell the truth


if u like it give me a rep

[Angster]

I like the way you pulled off the rhyming, however most of the lines are bland, cliché and basic. Maybe add more detail, which in return would build up suspense to make the poem more interesting.

[Surname]

It doesn't sound like a poem to me, it sounds like a part of a story.. :S

[Pulchritudinous]

It's not very good, but you could easily make it better cause I guess it's got potential.