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    This poem is written for my little brother Jacob.

    I barely even knew you,
    Who are you?Where you nice,
    All i know is I miss you,
    Come kiss me good night.

    I cuddle into my teddy bear,
    Wishing it was you,
    I want that reassurance,
    Thats why i need you.

    I need someone to tell me,
    Everything will be all right.
    I dont need a therapist,
    YOU will make me better,
    Come back, I miss you.
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!

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    I like it 9/10
    ROOTY!

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    'Tis a wee bit too sugar-coated for me, but then I'm the original emo kid.

    Whiney whiney suicidal heartbroken thoughts is what I do best. =)
    Try everything once, even the things you don't think you'll like.

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    Wowsh!
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!

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