HeartBroken.

[Vause]

Have you ever had the love of your life?
Have you ever felt that strongly for someone, you would take your own life, to save theirs?
This is a story about a girl who was truly in love.

Part One
She was a computer freak, along with him. She had loved him for 7 months. He never felt it, until one day. It hit him. He was in love, and this is when the madness started. They were in love. Things started off well, they were always tallking. Him and her, together forever. They did everything together. sang, slept, ate you name it, they did it. She had never known love like it. He was just there for the fun of having a girlfriend, he did love her. but could she see what was going to happen?

Part Two
It was two months later, they were stronger than ever.
She had become obsessed, always wanting him there. If he didn't tallk to her, she would become depressed and unloved. She felt it most days all the time.
He didn't like this, and decided that if this was her attitude he didn't wish to be with her much longer. He let it out to her slowly.
"I don't deserve you" he slowly told her, every second her heart slowly aching.
"YOU DO!" She wept, biting her lip trying not to cry. Evan though tears were streaming down her face.
Tears of hurt, tears of neglect and tears of pain.

Part Three
Desperatly, trying to change his mind.
"Stay, please, i can change!" she typed, as fast as her finger's could type.
He told her what he felt, he loved her still. But he just couldn't be with her much longer.
She told herself she would get over him, she tried. crying every night, trying to let the pain out.
She had many friends, but close to one of them. He was just so kind and loving.
He helpt her get over her pain, and slowly her heart jumped in to his hands. She found her Mr.right for the first time.
She knew that he wouldn't break her heart, he would hold on forever.
This love was unbreakable.


This is kind of a true story, but with a twist! It was a bit random.
What do you think?

[Toes]

Is this about a certain DJ?

[Vause]

Is this about a certain DJ?

I don't think anyone knows him.

[BlueTails]

Well Its Motley I Suppose?

[Vause]

Well Its Motley I Suppose?

actually its not.
this was before i evan knew him.

[GoldenGrahams]

;'O

That is so touching, and so beautifully written. I must say, I have had similar experiences in the past, but wish not to go over them.

Anywho, it's a fantastic story and all three parts touched me.

10/10 + Rep

One of the best 2 minute stories I have heard in my lifetime!

Very well written Emma.

I expect to see more great stuff like this in the future.

Brad x ♥

[Ferccia]

Wow! Emma thats an amazing and
touching poem. I absolutely love it!
10/10 +rep Well done Emma

[Fingerboots]

True love? Over the internet?
Humm.. ;l

It's well written, little on the short side but it's good that way. Nice =]

[BlueTails]

Well Its Great Emma x]

[x!x.Emily.x!x]

Awwwww 10/10 ;o!
I loved it! Soooo Touching.
Great story