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  1. #1
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    Default Friends no more (Poem)

    I wipe the tears away from my face,
    And from my memory I try to erase,
    The things that have gone on in the past,
    The friendship I thought would forever last.

    I try to forget what went on last night,
    But how cant I remember that heart-breaking fight?
    I try to ring her on the phone,
    Now I have no friends- Im on my own.

    I try to think what started it all,
    It was a regular night- we were having a ball,
    She found another 'spectacular' friend,
    But them two both, to me they offend.

    She looks at me with an evil glance,
    But still I carry on to dance,
    What made her like this? That evil turn,
    She is still the one I miss and still my heart burns.

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    Hm.. Nice poem =] Not as good as your others (in my opinion) but I still think it's good =]

    Well done, 8/10

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    It's supaaaa!


    (Ps. that happend to me )
    Leave your name when you rep me! i dont care if its bad rep! just leave your name!

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