First Habbo layout

[Nereo]

Thoughts on how I can improve this enough to make it sellable?

[Monopoly]

It's nice.
It feels like you've zoomed in though, which is weird. :S
Very good for a first go though.

[Nereo]

It's nice.
It feels like you've zoomed in though, which is weird. :S
Very good for a first go though.

Zoomed it? Maybe I have I dunno?

[Trinity]

Start by fixing all the errors on the box headers.

[Wayne]

The font does seem a big large tbh.

[DJ-Ains.T]

I don't like it, but if it's your first one, well done, you can go far with this buisness.

[BlueTackle]

yes, the text is small and the headers need sorting out, but its good for your first one.

[Meti]

It looks allright.
As said, it looks like you've zoomed it

[Fehm]

Everythings too big!

But it'd look good if you downscaled some stuff and made the writing the same all the way through the design

Good luck!