Plz Grade My Coursework Story......Be The Teacher!!

[Forest-Law]

Alright, this may be long but I promise I wrote this myself. It's a real coursework piece for Original Writing. I can edit it whenever I like but it has to be next year for real. So if u see anywhere I can change this to make it better plz let me know.
And give it a grade if u like, it has already been graded by the way, just want to see if other ppl's judgements match.

:edit: be careful not to post documents others could take into account. I read it though and it was good A*

[Eamonn]

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Hmm C+ Maybe

Nah i was only joking B+ or A-

[Tommy]

What year are you in? Is this youre year 10 coursework? I did this at the start of the year, but mine was only like 2 pages long, coursework isnt meant to be long,

make the examinator happy is my motto xP

[-=rooty987=-]

I read the first few paragraphs, and they are alot better than any other pieces you have written.
Love Dan
xxx

[GommeInc]

What year are you in? Is this youre year 10 coursework? I did this at the start of the year, but mine was only like 2 pages long, coursework isnt meant to be long,

make the examinator happy is my motto xP

Examiners have a strange fetish for bigs words and long essays.

[Tommy]

big words yes

long essays no =P

[Forest-Law]

yeh lol. it is quite long :p
if u must know I got an A go me

teacher description was 'brilliant description and at times overly descriptive' :rolleyes:

o and i'm in y10 and this is being entered next yr.

[Tommy]

lmao wow a grade A! well done...

I got a B+ for mine ;[