[Rk] - Naruto Uzumaki

[Rollerkingdom]

**** This is my best naruto alteration so far
NO DOUBT! I finally was able to do naruto's hair
I also gave a lot of details possible!
If i could rep myself i would xP

SOON ILL MAKE AN ANIMATION OF THE RASEGAN WITH HIM



Give me your opinion and rate it

Ref Pic:



I realized i forgot that 2 stripes from his head band
but it can be easily done!
Thanks to mason Ill add the thing on his neck too

[Kyle]

imo the hair is awful and the outfit is mediocre - sorry

[Rollerkingdom]

imo the hair is awful and the outfit is mediocre - sorry

I would like to see u make it ok Thanks

[Ardemax]

I would like to see u make it ok Thanks

He doesn't have to, he's commenting.
I think it's ok, imo.

[Kyle]

I would like to see u make it

for that comment I would have -repped you, but I have to spread before adding to you therefore I can't

[Shcl]

Its okay I think the hair should be a bit more triangular like the picture.

[Con]

I don't think it's amazing.
The hair isn't spiky enough to suit that guy IMO.
The outfit is ok I suppose, overall it's a nice alt but I don't think it's your best.

I would like to see u make it ok Thanks

Check out the forum, he has made pretty amazing alts of things
You might just get shown up if he made it.

[Kyle]

Okay, since you weren't happy with my previous comment, I have decided to elaborate, scrutinising every little detail of your alteration.

First off - I'll comment on the head; the shape of it makes it look stupid and, to be honest, nothing like the original drawing... Yeah, okay it's a habbo alteration but you could have tried to keep the same shape instead of creating some sort of wonky spikes that look like they need more hair gel. The shading is totally unneccessary, if you look at your reference image, you will notice that the hair only has 2 colors, there is no bright spot in the middle not is there darker spots on every spike. The headband looks rubbish because there is no shading on it at all and the face looks silly due to the fact that you've drawn spanning across his face whereas on the reference picture, the lines on his face are only on his cheeks.

Now then, the outfit... well there's nothing spectacular about it to be honest, the shading is ok but not the best - you have even slightly pillow shaded the pants. The jacket is missing it's neck, also seen in the reference image. The shoes look nothing like the originals... Yeah, okay the habbo legs aren't long but you could have made the shoes longer. Finally - what's with the bandage? IMO it ruins the legs because it looks tacky.

[Rollerkingdom]

Okay, since you weren't happy with my previous comment, I have decided to elaborate, scrutinising every little detail of your alteration.

First off - I'll comment on the head; the shape of it makes it look stupid and, to be honest, nothing like the original drawing... Yeah, okay it's a habbo alteration but you could have tried to keep the same shape instead of creating some sort of wonky spikes that look like they need more hair gel. The shading is totally unneccessary, if you look at your reference image, you will notice that the hair only has 2 colors, there is no bright spot in the middle not is there darker spots on every spike. The headband looks rubbish because there is no shading on it at all and the face looks silly due to the fact that you've drawn spanning across his face whereas on the reference picture, the lines on his face are only on his cheeks.

Now then, the outfit... well there's nothing spectacular about it to be honest, the shading is ok but not the best - you have even slightly pillow shaded the pants. The jacket is missing it's neck, also seen in the reference image. The shoes look nothing like the originals... Yeah, okay the habbo legs aren't long but you could have made the shoes longer. Finally - what's with the bandage? IMO it ruins the legs because it looks tacky.

Just to let you know when i put reference pic doesn't mean i was trying to do the same style as the pic, i used u just to see his clothes and etc..
and i am not good on doing hair so i am happy with mine!


and you seem to think you're a great artist but your avatar has a lot of pixel errors too
from that character and u did it facing forward which is way easier than doing it isometric..

[Kyle]

Just to let you know when i put reference pic doesn't mean i was trying to do the same style as the pic, i used u just to see his clothes and etc..
and i am not good on doing hair so i am happy with mine!


and you seem to think you're a great artist but your avatar has a lot of pixel errors too
from that character and u did it facing forward which is way easier than doing it isometric..

I think you'll find that it is isometric.... lol

I never once said that I'm a great artist, you're the one that is big headed... lol :rolleyes:

ps: thanks for the -rep saying "you're really rude" LOL!!!!!!!! I'm not rude, you just don't like the truth!