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    nice try make it longer are the writing small i can hardly read it =P

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    just remembered, i didnt enter it as it failed in sending
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    Text is far too small. Download Volter-goldfish. That's the font used for Habbo

    Overall, It looks like a good job, just the text needs to be readable.

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    the text is unreadable

    and after squinting to read the text, i dont understand the story

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    I cant read it
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    where do i Download volter :S?
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    That's well good I think!
    Well done

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    I like it, make text a tad bigger, and the whole thing really, but otherwise its awesome XD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Powez View Post
    I like it, make text a tad bigger, and the whole thing really, but otherwise its awesome XD
    nice critisism polly parrot

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