First Alts - Constructive Criticism? :D

[.x.miss.angel.x]

So when making my HABprentice thing i made two alts, Although i could not send my PowerPoint off because it was the wrong address, i think it anyways!

Here they are

[GreenCrayons.]

Good attempt, keep trying!

[Kipp]

Good attempt.

[AlexOC]

Bit disorted/strecthed.

The women has been stretched vertically, dosent look right.

[Cherpi]

Next time when you make an alt, Make sure its real size and then make it bigger once you've finnished, The boy is a bit.. strange but the girl is ok!

Keep trying

[Sixiz]

Not bad for a first alt but may i reccomend You use thicker lines for the outline's and try and practice your shading

Other than that brilliant