My Demi Lovato video comp entry

[Fifteen]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cH4gY-gwmS4

..so what do you think and how could I improve it?

[Ardemax]

you needed to zoom in more so you can see the words
and maybe use ShortKeys Lite (free) so you can have like one sentence, then you say the other etc.
but otherwise it looks good

[Jarkie]

its ok, you could of added some music & zoom it in so it is easy to see the words.

[Immenseman]

woah loving that rooms, whos the owner

hehe kl video gl dni x

[Ardemax]

woah loving that rooms, whos the owner

hehe kl video gl dni x

fort it said jay bar

[Immenseman]

clever play on words right there.

[e5]

lolllll
ok with the music etc
buttttt
you need the writing to be bigger with more effects andddd
the pixels fings poppin up is rather silly