KyleBolton Design

[Kyle!]

Well I launched my site a few minutes ago, still making improvements but tell me what you think of it so far, and if you want enquire about my services!

Click Here

[Jaysun]

Like, I said on twitter the site is beautiful.

[Cixso]

I would never be interested in your service because your content is awful.

Unprofessional:
Hello, I'm Kyle and I design stuff.

Spelling mistake:
are under thirty pound

Your website doesn't consist of any big words. It's screaming out to me that you need to rehabilitate the content.

The design is good, not appealing, just good. It doesn't convince me you are a good designer, especially at £30. I would just move on if I was a potential client. The content is below par.

Good luck with your business.

[Xarea]

Unprofessional:
Hello, I'm Kyle and I design stuff.

I'd have to disagree with the "unprofessional" comment. Not unprofessional at all. Many companies use the term "stuff".

He is obviously aware that his target audience is teenagers (since he's advertising his services on Habbox Forum), and "stuff" is a word teenagers (over)use.

My two cents.

[Cixso]

I'd have to disagree with the "unprofessional" comment. Not unprofessional at all. Many companies use the term "stuff".

Do you have any examples of these companies that state they design "stuff" as a service?

He is obviously aware that his target audience is teenagers (since he's advertising his services on Habbox Forum), and "stuff" is a word teenagers (over)use.[/QUOTE]

Stuff is for children, not teenagers. Unless the world of typical knowledge has downgraded. In that case god help our generation.

Never ever have I came across a professional company/business offering stuff as a service, or demonstrating that they offer stuff as an opening message or consecutive statements on their web page.

I respect that this is for teenagers and young adults a like, however I don't come across many teenagers who would pay £30, or a double sum figure after browsing a website as such. Do you?

Look at it from a potential clients point of view. There is nothing that wants me to use his service.

My opinion and experience anyway. Just my 2 nibbles.

[Kyle!]

To be honest, I was trying to make it sound fun and zainy, rather than your boring old content, and awful content? There is ONE spelling mistake, describes what I'm offering perfectly, and about the £30 bit, the designs are normally £15, it's just incase they want some really complicated stuff.

Cheek to talk about content as well, you have four lines of text on your front page. Nice.

As well, thanks a lot Jaysun.

[Cixso]

To be honest, I was trying to make it sound fun and zainy, rather than your boring old content, and awful content? There is ONE spelling mistake, describes what I'm offering perfectly, and about the £30 bit, the designs are normally £15, it's just incase they want some really complicated stuff.

Cheek to talk about content as well, you have four lines of text on your front page. Nice.

As well, thanks a lot Jaysun.

I'm sorry, this is about your web page, not mine. Learn to handle criticism, I was trying to help you. Not slate you.

My web site is perfect. I have experience and qualifications in this sector, so please - take it like a wise kid and be thankful that I am pointing out improvement areas for you.

It does describe what you are offering, but not in a way that it will gain you many clients. Seriously, if you want some business to be done, listen to my advice and start over again, as if you are a potential client.

If you are not good at English, then fair enough. Get somebody else whop knows what they are doing to help you.

[Meti]

Looks allright, simple and easy to navigate aroung.
Off topic: aren't you the one who stole Britz' layout?

[Kyle!]

Looks allright, simple and easy to navigate aroung.
Off topic: aren't you the one who stole Britz' layout?

Nope, don't even know who he is!

If you are not good at English, then fair enough. Get somebody else whop knows what they are doing to help you.

There was ONE grammatical error, the punctuation is all correct, and there are NO spelling mistakes. I study Higher English (which is A level I think in England not too sure) so I don't know how you can say I'm not good at English.

As well, your website is far from perfect. You wouldn't be selling it if it was perfect, and your layout is terrible. Also, your navigation links to directories that don't exist; perfect? I think not.

Posts merged by Xarea (Forum Moderator): accidental double post.

[Cixso]

There was ONE grammatical error, the punctuation is all correct, and there are NO spelling mistakes. I study Higher English (which is A level I think in England not too sure)

Let's start off from your advert.

Error number 1:

"Click Here" - Why have you gave "here" a capitol?

Error number 2:
"I code all layouts/designs in valid CSS and xHTML, so your site functions properly and " - Why have you inserted a comma? Remove it.

Error number 3:
"But, is he affordable?" - Why do you have a comma? Remove it.

Error number 4:
"under thirty pound" - It is pounds, not pound. You are talking about thirsty pounds.

Error number 5:
"If you're interested in anything from web design, coding, graphic design or even uploading a script and setting up for you, I'm your guy"

Read that sentance out loud, read it to somebody in person. It doesn't make sense what so ever.

Error number 6:
"To get any of these services simply go to the 'Contact' section and tell me what you need, and I'll get it finished in no later than three days; and if you want you can provide me with your IM contact address and I'll stay in contact with you, and let you know what's going on throughout the whole process. "

and, and and and and! Stop! I died for a breather!

My recommendation:

To order any of these services please visit the contact page and specifiy what you would require in your design. Once the order has been placed I will reply back within three days with the completed product.

If you would like to stay in contact with me during the production, then please provide me with your IM email address and keep you informed with the status.

What the hell number 1:
"so you don't have to start breaking the bank if you want a great and functional site. "

Breaking the bank? Where are you from? Is that a popular quote? Do you mean breaking into your bank?

Oh, I also have A level English.

so I don't know how you can say I'm not good at English.

Read my feedback and you will understand why I said that?

Seriously?

As well, your website is far from perfect. You wouldn't be selling it if it was perfect, and your layout is terrible. Also, your navigation links to directories that don't exist; perfect? I think not.

My website isn't even finished. It's not even officially open. I'm accepting orders as people are desperate for free web hosting. So, that little comment failed.

Check the web host section. *little giggle*

Moving onto your other comments on my website, that is your opinion on my layout, I respect that. However does this thread show "30mb" as the title or any purpose?

No? Then please, stay on topic in your own thread. Learn to handle criticism. You'll learn as you get older.