Layout 4

[Cutter]

would you say this one is a bit better, i think it may be a bit small but ill let you guys be the judges.

[Meti]

probably the best you've done so far.
A tips. take a look at the following habbo fansites, and get some inspiration of nice layouts.
www.habbcrazy.net

Can't remember more

[Excellent2]

A lot bettr but you need to tone down that shading and get a warmer blue.

[Mentor]

Somewhat microscopic, concider that you actually need to fit content on the layout

[Jam-ez]

Definitely better than any of your others, but still not good enough. Nice to see that you are improving, keep looking around for inspiration!