layout for my graphics assignment

[Tooplee]

(i'm sloppeh from chf)

Basically, it's for my product which is entitled, 'lunchbox', an organic lunch boxed in recycled card which you can purchase from supermarkets - it comes with a sandwich/salad/pasta and a snack along with a drink. That's basically it really.. I just have to create promotional materials such as a business card, a poster, website design etc.

(those photographs are mine btw, they're not stocksssss)

[l3etrayed]

Very nice clean design overall. Not sure about the text used on the bread image though... Maybe the size and positioning. Try moving it about a bit see if it can look any better! Other than that, good work!

[Jaysun]

I like it. It's clean and smooth.

[Tooplee]

Very nice clean design overall. Not sure about the text used on the bread image though... Maybe the size and positioning. Try moving it about a bit see if it can look any better! Other than that, good work!

Thanks for the comment but yeah, I agree. It was hard to place text onto the image due to white text not showing as clear as the other image, for example. I wanted to retain the same composition and style as the other so i just tried to increase the shadow, I'll see what I can do though, cheers.

I like it. It's clean and smooth.

Thankyou :]

[Johno]

I love it, can't really say much more than that haha!

[Tooplee]

Thankyou :]

[Blob]

i like it.

and the logo is cool lol

[AlexOC]

It's great, the text on the bread image isn't too bad imo.

[Tooplee]

Cheers guys :]

[CANNIBALEX]

i love it and it's a good brand idea