[JFDesigns] Newest Layout - Comments/ Suggestions Please

[RastaLulz]

Hello, I've recently made a new layout in Adobe Fireworks, and I must say that I'm quite proud of it.

I got some inspiration from here.

Original:

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http://foskett.ws/u/file_dir/1248063559.png

Original with smaller top nav text:

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http://foskett.ws/u/file_dir/1248063559.png

Please leave comments on it.

[Trinity]

The second one is much nicer, just move the text in the top bar up by 1px then I shall be pleased. Or maybe not, I'm too lazy to check what it would look like.
The nav is far too similar, and you shall be slapped if you do not change it. Also, the letter spacing needs to be increased on the links in the nav.
Not a fan of the box headers, they just look dull.
Increase the line height on pretty much all of text.
Change the icon at the top of the sub nav.

Overall it isn't exactly mind-blowingly good, but it's better than many of the layouts that get posted here.

I very rarely comment on layouts on this forum, you should feel lucky.

[iCicada]

Seconds the best

[RyanDOT]

Nice DP! .

Love the layout, how much?

[Fehm]

I dont like it. I find it kinda boring and a little too bland. Sorry!

[Turbocom]

Second one is really nice.

[iDenning]

its nice, however, too much inspiration. Nav bar and colours are exactly same