Voiceover. SP Entry.

[Accipiter]

or should i say spoink-1's*



i was quite pissed off that they closed this competition 5 days earlier than the last. i think its pretty bare to what it could have been seeing as i had 5 more days planned out, on the 19th i added detail to the floor and more people, and basically sent it -.- . i think its majourly reduced my chances

[Rollerkingdom]

It's great well done however i doubt it would win because it doesn't relate to habbo at all and habbo usa doesn't know what is habb prentice.

[Accipiter]

i explained it a bit more extensively when sending the email

but i think lack of detail under the house (behind the stairs) and around the house will let me down.

[dbgtz]

Why did you rip spoink-1s work, hes a legend compared to you.

[Accipiter]

damn right he is, he even has had more perms than me.

[Kyle]

First of all, I'll comment on the text (even though it's not part of the alt). Looks stretched, too much AA causing it to look blurry. I realise you didn't make it from scratch but I just thought I'd criticize it.

A lot more detailed than your original piece which is good but some parts, IMO, have been ruined. The cage-like creation that you originally had next to the large pipe seems to have transformed into some sort of box with a bunch of poles in the middle, which doesn't really look as good.

Not too keen on the [photoshopped?] smoke because it clashes with the pixelly feel of the rest of the alt. The red sphere at the top baffles me; firstly what's it for and secondly... why is it badly shaded? Add some dithering of some sort please.

I promised you 5 paragraphs of criticism so this is the part where I babble on about all the minor details.
1. Barrels look okay however the substance seeping from them looks like some kind of black bag.
2. Water lacks detail, could do with some ripples, maybe a life boat or something.
3. People have no faces.

That'll do, have fun.

[Accipiter]

tis impossible to detail their face to make it look k so i left it looks cool anyways and i literally couldn't be arsed with the water, since i added it at 10:30 on the 19th. Smoke was just cloud effect from paint.net also added late on the 19th, and the cage is the pole i saw used on land rigs, so i just decided to use it on a sea rig LOL. The oil seeping from the barrels is pretty detailed but anywhere else it lacks it. And the red dot is just supposed to be some sort of becon, which tbf i didn't even realise i added until i sent it, since i created it first LOL.

[thorn]

Lol, the fire bit looks like a real life drawing.

[DJ-Ains.T]

Some of its good, some of it looks awful.

[Accipiter]

i feel like i've let myself down not finishing it properly next time i'll not aim as high.