SP Oct - Duck reaper

[Accipiter]

the original image, which i prefer because it took loads to get it transparent onto the scene, (onto the black basically, but i was gunna put him coming through the window lmao.



Full scene, light coming from next to the toilet is an open door, obvo where the other light is coming from ^^


i still haven't really liked any of the sp comp types since i started, (3 month ago).

[Chancer!!]

Thats awsome! ^^ I like the croc aswell Hehee! 5/5

[Kyle]

When I first saw the image I honestly didn't fall in love with it but scrolling down and seeing the way that you implemented it into your final piece - it's great!

I assume that it's some kind of duckish-grim reaper-type-thing. Oh yeah I see the text. I couldn't read it at first and I'm actually still leaning back and forward in attempt to see what that really dark thing is under the text. Is it a duck? I'd suggest making this a little clearer by making the text and silhouette thing brighter so that people can actually see.

Right anyway onto the actual... Er... Uh... Thing. I'm quite aware that's it's a monster and all that jazz but I thought I'd enlighten you; DUCKS DON'T HAVE ARMS!!! Anywayssssss..... Once you take a second glance at it I could tell that a lot of effort has gone into it but when I first took a look I thought "What the hell is this? Looks like some n00b has cut a ducks head off, recoloured it and used the spray can tool to spray around it in.

The torch looks nice but I was quite disappointed when I noticed that there was no light source coming from it; you could have added a glaring blue light on top of the crocodile which IMO would look pretty damn cool The structure of it is good too.

Furthermore, the background; it's brilliant! Some parts deserve a little more attention though, for example:-

- The yellow... substance (?) on the shelf ~ Could have made it stand out a bit more rather than looking like a lump of yellow turd

- Duck blood ~ Yeah okay blood is thicker than water but I think you took this phrase a little too literal when you were drawing this; it looks like there's a trail of tender meat following the evil croc rather than bloody footsteps.

- Toilet roll ~ Looks a bit square

- Hole in the cabinet ~ I first thought that it was a handle

- Audrey's arm coming in through the window ~ Looks like a giant deformed pickle mate

I quite like the hidden face in the mirror but it should probably face out of the mirror instead of at the screen diagonally. Toilet could do with some cracks, green in sink is too subtle and looks like normal water, trees outside window could do with some more shading to thicken them a little.

1/10 n00b ;l

[Accipiter]

the blood ain't footsteps its dripping of his mouth, should have said that on msn @_@

and the writing in the black was much more distinct before i added a dark effect. Lols at you doing what i was doing when making it.

cabinet was the last bit i done and tbf, after today i couldn't be arsed to do anything else / improove, i was going to add a screaming habbo standing in the bath , and the yellow turd is a sponge LOL.

i actually like the critism you gave, as i do see where your coming from.

and this duck is special, he has arms.

[HOSKO02]

There's a head reflected in the window
Nice alt, the ghost looks a little non-Habbo but the room is tasty!

[thorn]

No Habbo Style In The Duck Apart from The face and the background.

The Duck needs to be more Habbo Like.

[ExtraKen]

When I first saw the image I honestly didn't fall in love with it but scrolling down and seeing the way that you implemented it into your final piece - it's great!

I assume that it's some kind of duckish-grim reaper-type-thing. Oh yeah I see the text. I couldn't read it at first and I'm actually still leaning back and forward in attempt to see what that really dark thing is under the text. Is it a duck? I'd suggest making this a little clearer by making the text and silhouette thing brighter so that people can actually see.

Right anyway onto the actual... Er... Uh... Thing. I'm quite aware that's it's a monster and all that jazz but I thought I'd enlighten you; DUCKS DON'T HAVE ARMS!!! Anywayssssss..... Once you take a second glance at it I could tell that a lot of effort has gone into it but when I first took a look I thought "What the hell is this? Looks like some n00b has cut a ducks head off, recoloured it and used the spray can tool to spray around it in.

The torch looks nice but I was quite disappointed when I noticed that there was no light source coming from it; you could have added a glaring blue light on top of the crocodile which IMO would look pretty damn cool The structure of it is good too.

Furthermore, the background; it's brilliant! Some parts deserve a little more attention though, for example:-

- The yellow... substance (?) on the shelf ~ Could have made it stand out a bit more rather than looking like a lump of yellow turd

- Duck blood ~ Yeah okay blood is thicker than water but I think you took this phrase a little too literal when you were drawing this; it looks like there's a trail of tender meat following the evil croc rather than bloody footsteps.

- Toilet roll ~ Looks a bit square

- Hole in the cabinet ~ I first thought that it was a handle

- Audrey's arm coming in through the window ~ Looks like a giant deformed pickle mate

I quite like the hidden face in the mirror but it should probably face out of the mirror instead of at the screen diagonally. Toilet could do with some cracks, green in sink is too subtle and looks like normal water, trees outside window could do with some more shading to thicken them a little.

1/10 n00b ;l

Now thats C&C lool Kyle :p:rolleyes:

Anyway liam I like it :d but I agree with the little things that kyle made such a big deal off 8) hehe

[Accipiter]

No Habbo Style In The Duck Apart from The face and the background.

The Duck needs to be more Habbo Like.

tbf, if it wanted to be habbo style, i'd have to create a **** square bin that sits in a corner.

its still habbo style but it just doesn't have pathetic black edges?

[Describe]

It's well good; taking in kyles criticisms i've got to add something about the ray of light coming from the open bathroom door. I got the fact that it was an open door right away but it's the direction that bothers me. Should it be drawing down out of the window? Shouldn't it be the reverse way around with the smaller light being at the bathroom door and the large area of light being on the wall?

[Rollerkingdom]

Not to sound rude but I don't know if it has a chance on winning, the alteration is pretty nice overall but the duck ripper doesn't look like habbo style which was asked on the rules. Also the position you place it could be quite hard to find and hard to notice it's a duck ripper.
other than that i agree with kyle about the blood or foot step that looks like meat
however i like the wall design.