Song I wrote :P

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First song I've ever written lol so I'd appreciate some opinions

http://www.mediafire.com/?m2yoyyqmmyy (It says a different song name cos I had called it a different name but I changed it )

Now I see the Truth

Lyrics:

Verse 1:
I've never seen you so obsessed
She's all you ever talk about
You dont seem to give a damn bout' anything or anyone else
Cos all her stupid jokes and flattery
Well they dont fool me, no
You need to go and face the truth
That girl she doesnt really want you
At least not the way I used to

Chorus:
That girls everything I'll never be
She's everything that you couldnt see in me
And never will
That girls not the person you thought you knew
I though I wanted to be her too
Not anymore
Cos now I see the truth

Verse 2:
She's your secret addiction
The one thing thats never off your mind
But does that girl listen to you
Does she think about you all the time?
She needs to open her eyes and see
Realise that she's not good enough for you
And never will be

Chorus

Bridge:
Realitys harsh but its time to face the truth
That girl, she doesnt want you
That girl's the only thing between you and me
And when that girl breaks your heart in two
Dont come looking for my comfort or sympathy

Chorus

[Rixion]

that's very good

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that's very good

Thanks