A Song I just wrote!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

[clueless]

really bored didnt no what to play on guitar so i made up my own LOL :{

either link:
http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1264282989.wma
http://www.zshare.net/audio/715557069f62ac65/

its only really half a song ill continue it never

lyrics:

She doesn’t know how to describe the way she feels about you
When she sees you down the hall it makes the rainy days blue
Seeing your face is a necessity its part of the routines must
She thinks its love but its far from that it’s a simple thing called lust

She’s blinded with her tinted glasses how perfect can you be
To her your what she’s wanted to every exact degree
Flawless you may appear but then with a second glance
Not quite the type to love so I wouldn’t take a chance

But how should I know he could be the right guy
Arrogance could be a deceiving lie
You could be friends and then be together
Through thick and thin when you’re under the weather
I could be the voice at the back of your mind
Trying to stop you from having a good time
So when you try decide just what to do
Head or your heart who do you listen to

constructive critisism please?

i wasnt really singing my heart out i sound kinda bored thruout LOL

[kk.]

sounds pretty good some of the lyrics are changed in teh song, and some lines sound hard to sing, like theres to many syllables. but good

[Haaaaarry1]

I really like the guitar part, and your voice Good song, I like it

[Hecktix]

Sounding good Sally

[Charlottay!]

I really like it lovin the lyrics

[clueless]

thankyou very much and yeah i think i need to rework a few lines

[clueless]

sorry to bump but anymore opinions?

[Nuct]

I like it, both the lyrics and your voice are pretty good!

its only really half a song ill continue it never

Continue it, and put it on YouTube.

[clueless]

thanks and i might do

[wiktoria]

That's really good Loving the lyrics