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    Default [+REP] Essay help please? :(

    Right,I need to write an essay for a scholarship.

    I need to write on "Your past achievements & future career aspiration"

    Can anyone please throw me some ideas & help me to write the introduction cause I have no ideaa

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    volunteer work, work experience, outside sports clubs or social clubs, gcse grades, school achievements (such as sporting awards)

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    Well, what is your future career aspiration? If you can start of with how you got interested in it to begin with, it might work well.


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    Hm..I have no idea how to start off the essay

    & I'm applying scholarship for accountancy

    Ahhh,I also need to get straight to the point cause there's a 1000 words limit >.<

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    You can kinda go "My passion for ... started when I was ... when ... happened and aspired me to become ..."


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    Quote Originally Posted by DieselShaq View Post
    You can kinda go "My passion for ... started when I was ... when ... happened and aspired me to become ..."
    Oh,that's quite good

    Hm..but maybe I should start with that & suppose tell a wee bit of my parent's role in encouraging me or summin.

    Supposedly,I should start first on the achievements and later on my future aspirations.Looks good?

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    Quote Originally Posted by MrGazet View Post
    Hm..I have no idea how to start off the essay

    & I'm applying scholarship for accountancy

    Ahhh,I also need to get straight to the point cause there's a 1000 words limit >.<
    You could start off with something like I am very interested in mathematics and statistics and my long term goal is to become an Accountant. For this I need to get (qualifications) and go to University to study (Business?). I have been successful in the past for achieving (any school awards, work experience, awards for sports?)

    All this is pretty hypothetical.I would actually write the main body first then do the introduction and conclusion as your brain should be well up to speed by then and cutting out words and precising can be done to get down it down to the relevant information.
    Last edited by Catzsy; 21-03-2010 at 04:10 PM.

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    Yeah,catszy those above are very straight forward which is good considered the limits Thanks

    Now,I have to work my damn brain off

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    Quote Originally Posted by MrGazet View Post
    Yeah,catszy those above are very straight forward which is good considered the limits Thanks

    Now,I have to work my damn brain off
    Well good luck and hope all goes well. =]

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