Quick shading

[Sharon]

I think I've figured out my shading so can you rate slate this jumper re-colour


Before:


After:


I'm not sure what happened towards the middle of the jumper but

Rate/slate - open to critism (I also did the bottom of the trousers but its un-noticable.)

TIPS TO IMPROVE WANTED .

[dbgtz]

The boobs are what happened
Alright recolour, it doesn't look shaded though, make the shaded areas a bit more visible.

[Lew]

You've un-shaded it..

[Colossus]

I can't really see the different.