My first enlargement

[rokgal]

My habbo enlargement my first one so EDIT: btw i know i cnat shade and i know their hair is rubbish

[Circadia]

Well its good for a first try but the are a few mistakes:
The shorts the line doesn't come outward on the original but on the enlargement you have made them come outward when they should be straight.
The Top on the enlargement isn't right it should be round at the bottom and gradually the it thins out into the straps but on the enlargement it goes round and indents and goes straight up.
The eyes aren't right You have made the eyelashes into eye brows which they aren't. and in fact all you have done with the eyes is made then longer.
The hands a funny shape and need sorting out.
And as you said the shading needs to be better.
Sorry for all the criticism but you have got the general outline right just the things inside need improving.

[rokgal]

kty for the feedback, i'll have it in mind for next time

[Samantha]

The feet are good. However, I do agree about the shorts hair and bikini lines they are a bit crooked.
On the other hand, I think it's pretty good for your first enlargement Charlotte!

[Muct]

It's OKay for a first try, but the smile and eys look a bit weird!

[j0rd]

Feet are the best, loads of errors on everything else
Its good for your first try tho

[Yupt]

It's not bad for a first attempt ;D
just take into note what Abi said and you'll be flying!

[Samantha.]

Quite good for a first attempt!
Abii gave you some useful advice so take that on board for when you make another one, i'm not too keen on the hair, it looks weird!

[Muct]

Quite good for a first attempt!
Abii gave you some useful advice so take that on board for when you make another one, i'm not too keen on the hair, it looks weird!

Yeah the hair looks a bit too... Blunt :S

[rokgal]

the hair looks wierd cos i couldnt exactly do the top curl on the right