Habbox Pharmacy, Second alt ever ! :D

[Drewar]

Hey guys, I know this shouldn't of taken an hour like it took me, but it really took a long time to add the detail to the roof etc, I really like how it turned out, and to be honest I'm not quite sure if you'll like it, and honestly I don't care :p

If I get just 1 8.5/10 or higher, I'll be proud

Please rate out of 10 and give C&C

[Dentafrice1]

Very good 9/10 for your secound Ever

[chilloutrich]

tis good 9/10

[Drewar]

Yay now I'm proud

[Dentafrice1]

Good Habbox Staff need to be proud or they have to go into your little building :p

[AndieJohanny]

Great job! You've improved since the cube The red cross looks a bit off, as in the sides don't look the same length all the way around (do you get what I mean?). Also the X in Habbox isn't isometric like all the other letters, it should be slightly slanted to match the angle of the sign. The lines on the roof shouldn't all be going in the same direction because the two sides of the roof are differen't angles... The lines should meet up more like in a V. One more thing that's not wrong or anything, it just bugs me, is that the door handles are right in the middle of the door :s I hope that helps, hopefully you understood it all

[Dentafrice1]

Lol Very Confusing :p

[Roboevil]

Hmm, rather strange, shaped more like a church, the cross is strange too, looks more like the St. George flag.

[Drewar]

Great job! You've improved since the cube The red cross looks a bit off, as in the sides don't look the same length all the way around (do you get what I mean?). Also the X in Habbox isn't isometric like all the other letters, it should be slightly slanted to match the angle of the sign. The lines on the roof shouldn't all be going in the same direction because the two sides of the roof are differen't angles... The lines should meet up more like in a V. One more thing that's not wrong or anything, it just bugs me, is that the door handles are right in the middle of the door I hope that helps, hopefully you understood it all

Thanks, well, I think I'm supposed to be thanking you, because I know somewhere in that hunk of critizism there is a compliment

Now, let's get down to business :p

Your Comments

Flag - I know it looks really dodgey, but I'm not sure how, maybe if you could lead me in the right direction I can edit it to your liking

Roof - I know what you mean, I was trying to make it work, got any idea how, like, besides making it more 'V-y' cause I don't really understand :s
Edit: I think I understand now... you mean, everything on the side of the door, has to be isometric in like, an 'up' way, and on the flag side, it has to be like, isometric, but like, 'up'y like... from going left to right, it would be like going down stairs right?

Door - I know what you mean, I was trying to do it like this



But I kind of messed it up somehow :p I'll try fixing it!

Hmm, rather strange, shaped more like a church, the cross is strange too, looks more like the St. George flag.

I wasn't really aiming to impress you, because your generally , emm... sarcastic? Anyway, I get what you mean, I originally wanted it to be a church, but then I had no idea how to do like a bell inside of the steeple so I took the easy way out, by trying to make the 'object' on the side of it to be like a stain glass window, then I thought, there is know way in hell I'll be able to make it look good, so again, I just turned it into a Hospital sign thing :p

Thanks for the critizism anway, even if it was very 'Roboevil-y'

[Roboevil]

I wasn't really aiming to impress you, because your generally , emm... sarcastic? Anyway, I get what you mean, I originally wanted it to be a church, but then I had no idea how to do like a bell inside of the steeple so I took the easy way out, by trying to make the 'object' on the side of it to be like a stain glass window, then I thought, there is know way in hell I'll be able to make it look good, so again, I just turned it into a Hospital sign thing :p

Thanks for the critizism anway, even if it was very 'Roboevil-y'

Humm, I think people take my saddistic sarcasm to personal and serious, I would try to tell you how fantastic you could make this alt if I cared, it illudes me why people find such petty things ammusing, but everyone's themselves to whatever...
To interpret my post.. Your 'cross' shouldn't really be there as it isn't what hospitals have, also, I don't know if you realised, but you said it was a pharmacy.. which has a pestle and mortar, at least the one in England does. Maybe you should turn it back into a church... :s.
It takes waaaay too much to impress me, Soyers hardly does it, i'm too much of a perfectionist, I hate most of my work after i've made it, I think Corbyn is one of the only person that has momentarily impressed me, i'm not saying every other pixel artist is rubbish, it's just my preferences.
I really don't know why i'm saying all this, it's your second alt, you have so much to learn about pixel art.