Habboxlive Jingle

[Richie]

One of the dj's requested this, thoughts?

http://dickbarry.com/djlogan3.mp3

[Trinity]

I'm far from experienced in things like this, but aren't jingles usually a bit more fast-paced? It just seemed a bit slow to me.
Also, your voice sounded a bit fuzzy, but I like your accent

[Eric]

Nice jingle ! Can u make one for me too ?

[Jamieb]

You need to sort out your levels mate, all diffrent levels...

[Richie]

You need to sort out your levels mate, all diffrent levels...

Yeah I know man, it's hard to judge the levels on basic programs like audacity. Even when I normalize the track it stays the same.