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  1. #1
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    Hey gang,

    Please can you take a look at my new portfolio/corner of the web design? And give me some feedback on it if possible.

    http://www.osmith.co.uk

    Thanks!

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    I think it is a bit basic and you could make it a bit more eye-catching but it is a solid job nonetheless!

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    i think yr text needs improving and formatting a little better. like jasey said it looks a bit basic at the moment, the font in particular looks very simple. while you want it to be easy to read, you also want it to have a little flair.

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    The text hurt my eyes, apart it being basic it's a good start. I like the option to click the picture and then to scroll through.

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