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    Default Apostrophe to Time

    Dear Death,

    We have not met,
    Yet soon we will meet -
    This is to be
    The only truth
    In a sea of uncertainty.

    Dear Life,

    We are so close,
    But we shall soon part -
    For I'm sorry to say
    I have someone to see,
    After this sea of uncertainty.



    Poem I came up with in the past half hour or so when setting myself a challenge to write an apostrophe, which is an address to an absent person or abstract idea - in this case, Life and Death. I'm quite proud of it as I usually write simple, nursery-like poems, if anything. I constantly changed things around, and in the end I just thought I'd post it as it is, possibly unfinished. Criticism and comments are welcome.
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    Wow I actually really liked it, I was amazed after I read it that you wrote it (not to make that sound bad) lol but it's just really good!!

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