I tried the top Lynn showed me.

[Schteffumz]

I'm not particularly happy with the flare thing at the bottom, couldn't get the shading right. I actually spent 40 minutes on this one!
Rating /10 + comments please

[ItsDave]

Thats really good, but your right about the flare at the bottom, oh and now i can give you that rep i think. well done 9/10

[Georgia]

I like it! 9 1-2/10

[Schteffumz]

Yea, thanks

There's not much more I can do, I struggle SO much with flares.

[Friction]

The fact it looks nothing like it is it's downfall..

[Schteffumz]

The fact it looks nothing like it is it's downfall..

Pardon?

Edit: I altered it a little bit, any better?

[.Lynn]

There seems to be too much shading on the top..

[Schteffumz]

Ok Lynn, I'll get that sorted.

Edit:

[MazeWizard]

Really good It's good you edit your mistakes so quickly and good. 9/10

[.Lynn]

Ok Lynn, I'll get that sorted.

Edit:

Its alright now..