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    Default Airplane..

    Made this about a month ago..
    Good/Bad? Improvements?

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    Looks nothing like a aeroplane.




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    Quote Originally Posted by iBlueBox View Post
    Looks nothing like a aeroplane.
    This, sadly.

    Perhaps try to focus on either the interior or the exterior. I think it's pretty much impossible to try and do both in one room!

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    interesting how buildings r small scale but octopus is v big. it really doesn't look like an airplane. ^agree w above, concentrate on interior or exterior


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    Pretty poor tbh
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    I think some people are brutally harsh. My opinion is it's not as good as it could be it has heaps of potential I love your use of hotel memorials and clouds I agree with Empired about the interior/outside the interior is excellent it really reminds me of a plane but I think you could improve on the outside. I would say mabye try and make the wings wider? they look to narrow.
    The cold never bothered me anyway.

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    Sorry, but I cannot see an aeroplane in that. Scale is just farrr to wrong and probably to difficult.

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    Yeah I don't see it in all honesty.. tbh was pulled towards the thread because of the spelling of Airplane in the title

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    It's a really good effort! Sweet design.

    Maybe these points could improve it a little more!
    • Possibly try raising it off the group a bit, using a stack magic
    • Take out the grass sand and water and just paint the ground blue and make it match the background
    • Place 2 or 3 fans instead of one, maybe stacked on top of each other



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    Thanks for the feedback everyone.
    I knew this was a tough one when I was making it and thanks to your feedback i'll try and improve it and make it a better and more realistic room.
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