Ice Cream Van

**dbgtz** · 10-08-2015, 06:52 PM

SackRace · 10-08-2015, 09:34 PM

Originally Posted by dbgtz

not bad, not a fan of the back wheel

**dbgtz** · 11-08-2015, 01:56 AM

Yeah there's lots I omitted during it. Got a bit lazy in the end

**Hannah** · 11-08-2015, 09:13 AM

It's pretty cool - not too sure on the outline of the ice cream though. Looks as though you forgot to finish it >.<

**Kyle** · 11-08-2015, 09:46 AM

Sadly the back wheel skews the whole thing downwards at the back visually. If you'd have given yourself a larger area to work with you might have been able to add a little more depth to the inside of the van but as it stands there's not enough room for a proper look through the shutter and the floor is quite high. I assume you tried the icecream at the back with a fully black outline but didn't like it; the half and half doesn't really work either - try something a bit darker maybe?

ALSO make your own wheels you scam. Cute numberplate

**dbgtz** · 11-08-2015, 01:13 PM

Originally Posted by Hannah

It's pretty cool - not too sure on the outline of the ice cream though. Looks as though you forgot to finish it >.<

Originally Posted by Kyle

Sadly the back wheel skews the whole thing downwards at the back visually. If you'd have given yourself a larger area to work with you might have been able to add a little more depth to the inside of the van but as it stands there's not enough room for a proper look through the shutter and the floor is quite high. I assume you tried the icecream at the back with a fully black outline but didn't like it; the half and half doesn't really work either - try something a bit darker maybe?

ALSO make your own wheels you scam. Cute numberplate

Regarding the outline, it's meant to be directly attached to the van and has depth, rather than being a "2d" image.

Tbh I just got really bored and wanted it done lmao. Thanks for feedback.

abitoflauren · 14-08-2015, 01:49 PM

The only things that look dodgy are the back wheel and the ice cream why don't you make the outline of the icecream like a whitey gray colour so it doesn't stand out too much