Cinderella's Disaster - Ends 30th November

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Habbox management have been reading the story of Cinderella. They have managed to read the first chapter but with shock they turned over the page to find nothing was there!

Once upon a time, there lived an unhappy young girl. Her mother was dead and her father had married a widow with two daughters. Her stepmother didn't like her one little bit. All her kind thoughts and loving touches were for her own daughters. Nothing was too good for them - dresses, shoes, delicious food, soft beds, and every home comfort.

For this competition, I would like you to write a short story for Cinderella using the chapter above as your opening paragraph. The most creative will win.

Prize: 2 Weeks VIP and 15 Rep

[Martin]

Once upon a time, there lived an unhappy young girl. Her mother was dead and her father had married a widow with two daughters. Her stepmother didn't like her one little bit. All her kind thoughts and loving touches were for her own daughters. Nothing was too good for them - dresses, shoes, delicious food, soft beds, and every home comfort.

One day she choked on a dodgy out of date banana and died.


The end.

[Curlz]

Once upon a time, there lived an unhappy young girl. Her mother was dead and her father had married a widow with two daughters. Her stepmother didn't like her one little bit. All her kind thoughts and loving touches were for her own daughters. Nothing was too good for them - dresses, shoes, delicious food, soft beds, and every home comfort.

All she wanted was to have her mother return and save her from this despair she was feeling. She set out to find a fairy to see if her wish could come true. However, all magic comes with a price. Will she risk it? or will she set out to make her own happiness without magic?

[Julielol]

Once upon a time, there lived an unhappy young girl. Her mother was dead and her father had married a widow with two daughters. Her stepmother didn't like her one little bit. All her kind thoughts and loving touches were for her own daughters. Nothing was too good for them - dresses, shoes, delicious food, soft beds, and every home comfort.

The stepmother got angry at the two stepsisters for not being satisfied of all the work she has done. She decides to make peace with the unhappy young girl named Cinderella. Cinderella and the stepmother brainstorms day after day on how to punish the stepsisters.
They tried every single punishment, but the stepsisters got angrier and angrier. At last, Cinderella and the stepmother chased the stepsisters out of the house with a frying pan. The stepsisters ran away and they soon became hobos in the streets.
Remember, if you see two female hobos, they are Cinderella's stepsisters.